1/4/2021 c1 Guest
Your story is beautiful and very convincing. To be honest i’ve never thought before that Miroku would feel scared to have the life without his kazaana, but to come to think of it such feeling is very possible. It was a good eye-opener and i loved the way you made me realize that. Thank you so much for a lovely fic.
I hope you would not mind if i recommended your fic in my Twitter (fully credited, off course).

7/25/2009 c1 12brakken
"I became a monk like my father and grandfather in order to obtain the skills I needed to kill him. I became a lecher like them in order to forget that I wouldn't survive."

Best damn line in the entire thing. Had me going 'yes!' quite exuberantly in my head. It's the sort of thing I've known for a while, but never could put into words as well as you just did. It's simple, devastating, and says so much with so little...my kudos. The rest en't bad either. I especially appreciated the surprise I had at the way he pulled her into his lap; I expected it, and yet I didn't...You never expect someone so in control as he to lose it, but it makes so much sense in context. Very nice indeed. I wish more people paid attention to character exposition like this...

3/24/2008 c1 Gine
I like this. The dialogue and characterization sound natural and real. Good stuff!

3/10/2008 c1 7Edward Houshi
Long, but with a really short ending. Still, very cute, and I can totally see how Miroku would feel this.