for Claw Marks On My Heart4/23/2008 c4 Meg.x
:( NO! PLEASE WE NEED TO FIND OUT HOW KAGOME RESPONDS TO AN I Love You! Come On One More Chapter!
:( NO! PLEASE WE NEED TO FIND OUT HOW KAGOME RESPONDS TO AN I Love You! Come On One More Chapter!
4/23/2008 c4 
2surfer.teen
! THAT WUZ SO FREAKIN AWESOME! I ESPECIALLY LUVED THAT FINAL KISS/ MAKE-OUT SCENE! !
YOU ROCK!
2surfer.teen! THAT WUZ SO FREAKIN AWESOME! I ESPECIALLY LUVED THAT FINAL KISS/ MAKE-OUT SCENE! !
YOU ROCK!
4/23/2008 c4 10UsagiMoon2627
I loved it! A beautiful battle scene, told with humor and intensty. And I loved the ending... gods... what I wouldn't give to have someone tell me that.. lol... good job!
10UsagiMoon2627I loved it! A beautiful battle scene, told with humor and intensty. And I loved the ending... gods... what I wouldn't give to have someone tell me that.. lol... good job!
4/22/2008 c4 1TheCookieGirl
OMG! UR DONE! i dont know what to say cuz i am speach less! THE ENDING WAS AWSOME IT MADE ME BLUSH! alittle okaay hahahaha OMG! i love this story thank you for continiuing it! i followed this story from chap 1! and omg i fell in love hahaha here u have follower luck luck in future fics! this has been one of the best fics iv ever read! omg.. ay ke hermoso
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1TheCookieGirlOMG! UR DONE! i dont know what to say cuz i am speach less! THE ENDING WAS AWSOME IT MADE ME BLUSH! alittle okaay hahahaha OMG! i love this story thank you for continiuing it! i followed this story from chap 1! and omg i fell in love hahaha here u have follower luck luck in future fics! this has been one of the best fics iv ever read! omg.. ay ke hermoso
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4/22/2008 c4 28Inu Hanyou Nikkie
Oh yes! This is everything I thought it might be like and so much more!
The way Kagome threw that temper tantrum to stay with InuYasha! Loved it! I enjoyed Sango's brillant shooting down of Miroku's idea! The way the lecher bounced back! Funny! The descriptions! Perfect! I saw this little typo: “So, it’s a good (think) that you’re shaking?” You may have meant thing instead.
I loved that you had Kagome carrying a jar of Jinengi's medicine to use! I liked how you made Kagome realistic about her wounds and about feeling the pain! And Kudos to you having Kagome do that little reaction to InuYasha waking up. And how you had Kagome mature with her using the rosary gently to get InuYasha to stay still for his wounds to be treated and bandaged up again.
You wrote out the realization of what he had done in the most delightfully True to their Character way! It was Beautiful! I could feel his disgust at himself, the horror that he did this and doesn't remember. I could feel his sense of despair to see his nightmare realized. The way he hated himself for not scenting her blood earlier and for seeing it on/under his claws. The disbelief that Kagome still stays by his side even though he is a "monster". How Kagome used her words and presence to convey her truth, honesty, forgiveness and love to him. Brillant!
The kiss was exquisite as well! I loved the way Kagome's brain turned off and she forgot to respond to him but quickly fixed that problem fast! Very romantic! I think this is one of those kisses that is mentioned in The Princess Bride!
The ending I trilled! You had me fangirl-squealing! I think this is the one time I actually enjoyed reading where Inuyasha considered becoming human for Kagome by his own will and choice!
I thank you very very much for sharing this with us your readers. For letting us see and review it! I really - very- much enjoyed this fanfic! Bravo! Yes if this was in Theatre I would stand up and clap! I look forward to more from you! Again Thank you for Posting!
28Inu Hanyou NikkieOh yes! This is everything I thought it might be like and so much more!
The way Kagome threw that temper tantrum to stay with InuYasha! Loved it! I enjoyed Sango's brillant shooting down of Miroku's idea! The way the lecher bounced back! Funny! The descriptions! Perfect! I saw this little typo: “So, it’s a good (think) that you’re shaking?” You may have meant thing instead.
I loved that you had Kagome carrying a jar of Jinengi's medicine to use! I liked how you made Kagome realistic about her wounds and about feeling the pain! And Kudos to you having Kagome do that little reaction to InuYasha waking up. And how you had Kagome mature with her using the rosary gently to get InuYasha to stay still for his wounds to be treated and bandaged up again.
You wrote out the realization of what he had done in the most delightfully True to their Character way! It was Beautiful! I could feel his disgust at himself, the horror that he did this and doesn't remember. I could feel his sense of despair to see his nightmare realized. The way he hated himself for not scenting her blood earlier and for seeing it on/under his claws. The disbelief that Kagome still stays by his side even though he is a "monster". How Kagome used her words and presence to convey her truth, honesty, forgiveness and love to him. Brillant!
The kiss was exquisite as well! I loved the way Kagome's brain turned off and she forgot to respond to him but quickly fixed that problem fast! Very romantic! I think this is one of those kisses that is mentioned in The Princess Bride!
The ending I trilled! You had me fangirl-squealing! I think this is the one time I actually enjoyed reading where Inuyasha considered becoming human for Kagome by his own will and choice!
I thank you very very much for sharing this with us your readers. For letting us see and review it! I really - very- much enjoyed this fanfic! Bravo! Yes if this was in Theatre I would stand up and clap! I look forward to more from you! Again Thank you for Posting!
4/22/2008 c4 4kokoronagomu
NO! he needs to stay hanyou, keep his ears and his strength! maybe he should wish for control of his youki (youkai energy/aura/ki) and his youkai. he needs his youkai strength to keep her safe, he needs his white hair, ears, claws and fangs because they are 'sexy dangerous' besides there wasn't much difference with what he was just doing with his so called 'human' side than what you described his 'youkai' side did with her after he scratched her... didn't think he was going to eat her... well maybe not as a meal or food, anything like that.
i personally like the stripes, crests, whatever the jagged blue lines on his cheeks... they're better than sesshoumaru's.
she loves him as hanyou...
i have become emotionally involved. i enjoyed how you depicted kagome and her reactions to his injury and bandaging him. his reaction to his realization. good stuff. a few minor typos but i forgot where they were and couldn't find them again without reading it over, sorry.
thank you,
ginny
4kokoronagomuNO! he needs to stay hanyou, keep his ears and his strength! maybe he should wish for control of his youki (youkai energy/aura/ki) and his youkai. he needs his youkai strength to keep her safe, he needs his white hair, ears, claws and fangs because they are 'sexy dangerous' besides there wasn't much difference with what he was just doing with his so called 'human' side than what you described his 'youkai' side did with her after he scratched her... didn't think he was going to eat her... well maybe not as a meal or food, anything like that.
i personally like the stripes, crests, whatever the jagged blue lines on his cheeks... they're better than sesshoumaru's.
she loves him as hanyou...
i have become emotionally involved. i enjoyed how you depicted kagome and her reactions to his injury and bandaging him. his reaction to his realization. good stuff. a few minor typos but i forgot where they were and couldn't find them again without reading it over, sorry.
thank you,
ginny
4/22/2008 c4 3ArcticPuppet
It was good, though you wrote "hamamaka" instead of "hakama". Also, because if the end, this might not be considered rated T anymore. I doubt anyone will really complain about it, but you might want to fix it just in case (people can be ass hats sometimes). But other than that one error, this was really good and well written. I like how it ended, but it's pretty rude of them to do that while Shippo is sleeping lol
3ArcticPuppetIt was good, though you wrote "hamamaka" instead of "hakama". Also, because if the end, this might not be considered rated T anymore. I doubt anyone will really complain about it, but you might want to fix it just in case (people can be ass hats sometimes). But other than that one error, this was really good and well written. I like how it ended, but it's pretty rude of them to do that while Shippo is sleeping lol
4/22/2008 c4 18Moonlit Showers aka InuKag Fan
aww, how utterly adorable. cute ending, although Inuyasha sure recovered fast. I can't wait to see more stories from you. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
18Moonlit Showers aka InuKag Fanaww, how utterly adorable. cute ending, although Inuyasha sure recovered fast. I can't wait to see more stories from you. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
4/20/2008 c3 1wolfhowler245
ur story is really good so far. what inuyasha said before he passed completly out mad my heart melt. seriously. well update soon, cant wait for more romance XD
1wolfhowler245ur story is really good so far. what inuyasha said before he passed completly out mad my heart melt. seriously. well update soon, cant wait for more romance XD