10/24/2010 c6 hpfan
nooooooo
jordan is soo sweet. have her stay with him and kill james potter
nooooooo
jordan is soo sweet. have her stay with him and kill james potter
8/22/2008 c13 1MoonyPadfootandProngs981
This was a good ending! I wish it didn't have to be over though! you should write another story! Great chapter!
~MPP
This was a good ending! I wish it didn't have to be over though! you should write another story! Great chapter!
~MPP
7/16/2008 c13 dracosbabygrl
great story. i think the ending couldn't have been perfect. write another one soon!
great story. i think the ending couldn't have been perfect. write another one soon!
7/15/2008 c13 7DeadlyCreative
A sorta shrange ending...yes, but I think it was still good. Even though i still want more...
:] ~ Deadly Creative
A sorta shrange ending...yes, but I think it was still good. Even though i still want more...
:] ~ Deadly Creative
6/29/2008 c13 once and future
Loved the story! I thought the ending fit really well. Even though I really wished that I could have read James's response to Lily's last line...
Loved the story! I thought the ending fit really well. Even though I really wished that I could have read James's response to Lily's last line...
6/26/2008 c7 1Love those Marauders
This is probably my favorite chapter.
I've noticed that you're chapters are a bit short. (Don't worry, mine are, too!) But I still enjoy them lots and lots.
Keep writing- I know your finished with this story, but I hope your working on another.
This is probably my favorite chapter.
I've noticed that you're chapters are a bit short. (Don't worry, mine are, too!) But I still enjoy them lots and lots.
Keep writing- I know your finished with this story, but I hope your working on another.
6/22/2008 c13 shetlandlace
You did a great job! You ended it at the perfect place. I really enjoyed reading this one.
You did a great job! You ended it at the perfect place. I really enjoyed reading this one.
6/21/2008 c12 6SaritaMalfoy22
Absolutly Great!
Update soon, and also one question; is Lilys friend Alice, Alice Longbottom?
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Absolutly Great!
Update soon, and also one question; is Lilys friend Alice, Alice Longbottom?
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6/16/2008 c12 1MoonyPadfootandProngs981
good chapter. I can't wait to see what she says to James. Lily is so bad for doing this to him.
~MPP
good chapter. I can't wait to see what she says to James. Lily is so bad for doing this to him.
~MPP