
5/25/2010 c1
1Kuwabara99
great oneshot!
Kira watching over Fllay after the war. very nice^^
Kira/Fllay is my fav pair of Seed
well done!

great oneshot!
Kira watching over Fllay after the war. very nice^^
Kira/Fllay is my fav pair of Seed
well done!
11/23/2009 c1
16RedCrimson
A great story, Kira really tries to do everything he can to show flay shes not alone, and flay gets the necklace as the first symbol of their bond. Good start to show cagalli accepting of kira wanting flay in his life.

A great story, Kira really tries to do everything he can to show flay shes not alone, and flay gets the necklace as the first symbol of their bond. Good start to show cagalli accepting of kira wanting flay in his life.
10/5/2009 c1 Layla-L
It was just that the Allster family estate here in Orb was very large; very spacious.
Very empty.
=
These sentences made me so sad...
God, what do we expect from a girl who is only 15 and has just lost her papa?
Wish Fllay a happy life after the horrible time...with Kira, so gentle, to take care of her.
Happy birthday, dear Fllay.
It was just that the Allster family estate here in Orb was very large; very spacious.
Very empty.
=
These sentences made me so sad...
God, what do we expect from a girl who is only 15 and has just lost her papa?
Wish Fllay a happy life after the horrible time...with Kira, so gentle, to take care of her.
Happy birthday, dear Fllay.
10/29/2008 c1
15mindset
I can't believe I'm very late for this *sniffs*
Been busy with a lot of things since then I wasn't able to check the Kira/Fllay archive until now, you're very in good in depicting what's between the two characters X3 the SEED series should have been like this LOls.
The Kira/Fllay fandom is now so lucky to have a writer like you around, keep writing more stories about them. I could have done the same if only my schedule and my brain would permit me to XDD~
Keep it up and good luck on your future stories.

I can't believe I'm very late for this *sniffs*
Been busy with a lot of things since then I wasn't able to check the Kira/Fllay archive until now, you're very in good in depicting what's between the two characters X3 the SEED series should have been like this LOls.
The Kira/Fllay fandom is now so lucky to have a writer like you around, keep writing more stories about them. I could have done the same if only my schedule and my brain would permit me to XDD~
Keep it up and good luck on your future stories.
4/20/2008 c1
33Rinhail
I really enjoyed how you interpretated Fllay's injuries. I usually read about her surviving, but getting hardly no burns and such.
Really good work.

I really enjoyed how you interpretated Fllay's injuries. I usually read about her surviving, but getting hardly no burns and such.
Really good work.
4/2/2008 c1 indr0008
no this is not good, I've found another good fllayX kira story that
surely will get my minds off to the world of those two...
thanks for the story, now i'll try to read that Second Chance and Evolution... exam? screw them
no this is not good, I've found another good fllayX kira story that
surely will get my minds off to the world of those two...
thanks for the story, now i'll try to read that Second Chance and Evolution... exam? screw them
3/17/2008 c1
1Vanguarde
Hehe. That was cute. good job as always, it's good to know you're putting thought into your universe. So keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Hehe. That was cute. good job as always, it's good to know you're putting thought into your universe. So keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
3/17/2008 c1 Gatomon41
A lovely story and a perfect gift for Fllay ^_^
A lovely story and a perfect gift for Fllay ^_^
3/17/2008 c1
2Irui
I'm late -hehe- I HAVE AN EXCUSE for being internet-less for a few days. Should i put a happy face for that or a sad one? o.o
Umm...ANYWAYS:
Aw. So fluffy XD though it started out a bit...sad-ish.
Irui-chan "demands" (XD) more good KXF stories from you! -runs away before getting turned into dust-
Happy belated b-day to Fllay-chan!
~Irui

I'm late -hehe- I HAVE AN EXCUSE for being internet-less for a few days. Should i put a happy face for that or a sad one? o.o
Umm...ANYWAYS:
Aw. So fluffy XD though it started out a bit...sad-ish.
Irui-chan "demands" (XD) more good KXF stories from you! -runs away before getting turned into dust-
Happy belated b-day to Fllay-chan!
~Irui
3/16/2008 c1
39Storm Wolf77415
Very sweet, Enchanter. The Kira/Flay archive needs more stories like this. Like you said, Happy Birthday Flay!

Very sweet, Enchanter. The Kira/Flay archive needs more stories like this. Like you said, Happy Birthday Flay!
3/16/2008 c1 AfroAzn
I really liked this. I love how you made Flay seem remorseful about what she made Kira do during they war, the only side of her you see before she dies. The necklace idea was really good and I love the symbolism in it. I love it! Keep up the good work.
I really liked this. I love how you made Flay seem remorseful about what she made Kira do during they war, the only side of her you see before she dies. The necklace idea was really good and I love the symbolism in it. I love it! Keep up the good work.
3/16/2008 c1 bloodyknight85
'Okay... Happy Birthday, Fllay Allster... We all love you! Er... I guess not... Hey, it's the girl's birthday... What can i say, man? Kira is sweet to buy the necklace for Fllay even though it is not exactly his idea... But nevertheless, it made Fllay happy... What can i say again!'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Okay... Happy Birthday, Fllay Allster... We all love you! Er... I guess not... Hey, it's the girl's birthday... What can i say, man? Kira is sweet to buy the necklace for Fllay even though it is not exactly his idea... But nevertheless, it made Fllay happy... What can i say again!'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!