for Hokage No More10/15 c8 trash
Lmao this is trash, people like you make me sick
Lmao this is trash, people like you make me sick
10/10 c11 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue with the story, it's very good. Please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you this because I'm a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.
Please continue with the story, it's very good. Please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you this because I'm a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.
9/23 c2 Anton Vlasov
Цунаде дура она не имеет право на это соглашатся наруто по факту ни кто он стратегический потенциал деревни
Цунаде дура она не имеет право на это соглашатся наруто по факту ни кто он стратегический потенциал деревни
6/11 c4 akirathewolflord
Hey guest the story seems to allude to hinata dying in her fight with pain trying to save Naruto (which is where she confessed), it's a fanfic is not supposed to follow Canon, it's essentially an alternate reality, have you read fanfics before or understand the concept of them? It would seem you don't if it follows Canon then its not a fanfic, if I remember correctly neji died protecting hinata and if she already died he would have no reason to sacrifice himself so it's actually a good continuity concept that ties in an event from the 4th war, the author actually did well in tying up potential plot holes, your whole rant is utterly ridiculous (minus the part about abandoning works, I actually have to agree, though I think most authors just get bored after a few chapters or just forget and thus they get abandoned)
Hey guest the story seems to allude to hinata dying in her fight with pain trying to save Naruto (which is where she confessed), it's a fanfic is not supposed to follow Canon, it's essentially an alternate reality, have you read fanfics before or understand the concept of them? It would seem you don't if it follows Canon then its not a fanfic, if I remember correctly neji died protecting hinata and if she already died he would have no reason to sacrifice himself so it's actually a good continuity concept that ties in an event from the 4th war, the author actually did well in tying up potential plot holes, your whole rant is utterly ridiculous (minus the part about abandoning works, I actually have to agree, though I think most authors just get bored after a few chapters or just forget and thus they get abandoned)
5/14 c11 Guest
This was one of the most disappointing fanfictions I’ve ever read because it didn’t give a resolution or at least it doesn’t give a chapter where Sakura is called out for being a worthless fan girl and a bad friend and what’s up with hinata dying it was Neji who died. you mean tell me he was the same asshole in Cannon and never changed
Bullshit it should have been that Hinata went with Naruto, and the three of them got married (Naruto, hinata, and temari I mean). you simply killed her off because you didn’t like her and you’re terrible writer because of that. and yet another fanfiction gets Canceled all because a writer can’t finish what they started. It seems all writers do that nowadays they come up with some bullshit excuse as to why they can’t finish their computers broken, their car broke down, David kronkite is in their attic, Ect it’s honestly really pathetic
This was one of the most disappointing fanfictions I’ve ever read because it didn’t give a resolution or at least it doesn’t give a chapter where Sakura is called out for being a worthless fan girl and a bad friend and what’s up with hinata dying it was Neji who died. you mean tell me he was the same asshole in Cannon and never changed
Bullshit it should have been that Hinata went with Naruto, and the three of them got married (Naruto, hinata, and temari I mean). you simply killed her off because you didn’t like her and you’re terrible writer because of that. and yet another fanfiction gets Canceled all because a writer can’t finish what they started. It seems all writers do that nowadays they come up with some bullshit excuse as to why they can’t finish their computers broken, their car broke down, David kronkite is in their attic, Ect it’s honestly really pathetic
4/22 c8 Naru
This story is bad. Each chapter is worse than the last.
This story is bad. Each chapter is worse than the last.
7/19/2023 c7 Guest
How does this go from so good to so bad
How does this go from so good to so bad
7/19/2023 c11 
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Woo, can't wait to see it all come to a finish. Poor Naruto deserves to have a happy ending.
13N7 Greek-ValkyrieWoo, can't wait to see it all come to a finish. Poor Naruto deserves to have a happy ending.
7/13/2023 c11 volcasiron30
yes it's good to see this story back up and running I had thought that you discontinued it after a long time I'm not updating me but it's good to see you you want to continue it until The bitter End and I thank you for it if you have any story ideas that you need I can send it to your PM box and you can message me back through the p.m. system they let me know what you think of them?
yes it's good to see this story back up and running I had thought that you discontinued it after a long time I'm not updating me but it's good to see you you want to continue it until The bitter End and I thank you for it if you have any story ideas that you need I can send it to your PM box and you can message me back through the p.m. system they let me know what you think of them?
1/11/2023 c7 Sage-Of-Pure-Rage
wtf I'm so mad I wasted my time with this story shit is extremely horrible.
wtf I'm so mad I wasted my time with this story shit is extremely horrible.