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9/12/2014 c1 tin-a-holic
I knew there was a reason I always loved a mans hands ;p So yummy mmmm
4/23/2010 c1 126SilverLunarStar
At first I thought that "Here was a woman who knew what she wanted and didn't try and hide it" was my favorite sentence, but the last two lines did me in.

Loved it!
6/12/2008 c1 PlayKate
"THAT" was first time smut? Damn. Very good.
3/24/2008 c1 226Zaedah
Typing this only after picking up my jaw from the floor. It's a little out of shape now, but who cares! Smashing, hot as hell and all sorts of WHOA!
3/16/2008 c1 15KateCayce
Must take a cold shower now! Pretty damn good for never writing smut before!
3/15/2008 c1 9Twin-Lance
Is this what this is? Your practice for Want? lol Well, I must say, for someone who's never written 'smut' you didn't do too bad. Let me rephrase that, it's very good. The detail you put into their action/reactions made it feel more real. My only criticism, is there seemed to be a whole lotta detail in the foreplay and then there wasn't at the end; it was all over for Cain in like 2 minutes. lol
3/15/2008 c1 nadeshiko1
WOW! I am impressed beyond words! Of course this is written smut!

Question: Is this in response to purplerhino's fanfiction challenge from LiveJournal? I've only seen one and that was from Lattelady. If it is, it's reall good!

*Fans self* Anyone else want a glass of water or a fan?

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