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3/24/2008 c2 7ShingetsuMoon
Hmm, not bad at all. I like the detail that you put into your chapters. I'm trying to work on that with my stories but...it's not going as well as I would like. D

Also don't worry about the length either, not everybody has time to read long chapters. Adjust things as you see fit, thats what being an author is all about after all. So I think your doing pretty good for yourself so far. Keep writing, I look forward to another chapter.
3/20/2008 c1 2Silva-kun
I think it is pretty good so far. Don't worry about the length though, Sometimes people can't read a lot at a time so I think that the length is fine. I'm ready to read more.

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