
4/26/2009 c2 Grumpy Old Diamond
I can truthfully agree with darkraven, this story has potential! I have only one question: next chapter soon? Please? I wants more...
I can truthfully agree with darkraven, this story has potential! I have only one question: next chapter soon? Please? I wants more...
5/7/2008 c1 DragonMaster77
I really like it I think I know who that Ga-Metru is but I'm not spoling it and I love how you're making the story from the origanal Toa's point of view update soon ;)
I really like it I think I know who that Ga-Metru is but I'm not spoling it and I love how you're making the story from the origanal Toa's point of view update soon ;)
3/29/2008 c1
18dark raven0
Personally, I think this story has a great amount of pontential :) it's original and promises a good plot.
update soon please!

Personally, I think this story has a great amount of pontential :) it's original and promises a good plot.
update soon please!