for I, Too, Sing Konoha7/28/2009 c1 Guest
Sorry to say, but this really doesn't seem like a parody. Looks more like someone trying to copy a poem to me. The good thing is that it describes Naruto perfectly.
Sorry to say, but this really doesn't seem like a parody. Looks more like someone trying to copy a poem to me. The good thing is that it describes Naruto perfectly.
6/28/2009 c1 
10Mede
I'd call this more a takeoff than a parody, and it seems to be a pretty good one. Nice rhythm, matches Naruto even from the little I know of the character, and seems to keep the same basic message as Langston Hughes' poem. So nice job. :)
10MedeI'd call this more a takeoff than a parody, and it seems to be a pretty good one. Nice rhythm, matches Naruto even from the little I know of the character, and seems to keep the same basic message as Langston Hughes' poem. So nice job. :)
6/8/2009 c1 8Brie92
I really like it. It fits Naruto perfectly. He doesn't let the people of Konoha get to him and he plans to make his future brighter. And he'll show them that his dreams will become real and then everyone will feel bad for the way they treated him.
8Brie92I really like it. It fits Naruto perfectly. He doesn't let the people of Konoha get to him and he plans to make his future brighter. And he'll show them that his dreams will become real and then everyone will feel bad for the way they treated him.
7/14/2008 c1 Dark Yoruichi
I really like this poem. It describes Naruto really well, and doesn't have to be very long. =)
I really like this poem. It describes Naruto really well, and doesn't have to be very long. =)
3/18/2008 c1 Shadow Kitsune67
Lol. . .nice. Fits Naruto quite well. Good job. :) I'm not much of a critique but I liked it.
Lol. . .nice. Fits Naruto quite well. Good job. :) I'm not much of a critique but I liked it.