
5/8/2010 c2
1MewMewLea
ahhh I hate cliffhangers! lol
i like it so far though, please put up the next chapter! :D

ahhh I hate cliffhangers! lol
i like it so far though, please put up the next chapter! :D
12/12/2009 c2 PartyRocks
it's great story! why did you cut the story? you should update this it's really awsome :)
it's great story! why did you cut the story? you should update this it's really awsome :)
4/19/2009 c2
1Kisshufan0878
I love it so far, but could you put MAasaya bashing in the next chap? I hate him.

I love it so far, but could you put MAasaya bashing in the next chap? I hate him.
7/13/2008 c2 Shehochan93
Within 2 chapters it sounds like another predictable story that everyone else has made about kishu and ichigo.Seriously these predictable sories get more and more boring to read. I already get the fact that ichigo and masaya have to break up but this way is so plain an simple. I'm hoping in the next few chapters it won't bore me to death. In order for a story to work you need conflicts pease the author of this story don't get too deep within the whole love scene or else I'll die of boredom I want to be interested for christ sake's can you author's give me that
Within 2 chapters it sounds like another predictable story that everyone else has made about kishu and ichigo.Seriously these predictable sories get more and more boring to read. I already get the fact that ichigo and masaya have to break up but this way is so plain an simple. I'm hoping in the next few chapters it won't bore me to death. In order for a story to work you need conflicts pease the author of this story don't get too deep within the whole love scene or else I'll die of boredom I want to be interested for christ sake's can you author's give me that
6/25/2008 c2
32Safaia Bara
nice job! yay- get Aoyama out of the picture! i do hope the future chapters are longer though...
good luck!

nice job! yay- get Aoyama out of the picture! i do hope the future chapters are longer though...
good luck!
3/20/2008 c1 Kimmikala
Yor sould keep writing this one- it sounds like it will be really good. I like your writing style! Hurry up with the next chappy, K?
Yor sould keep writing this one- it sounds like it will be really good. I like your writing style! Hurry up with the next chappy, K?