
7/2/2017 c1 lol
Well written!
Well written!
11/13/2012 c1
32Louey06
Very good story. you did a nice job on the emotions and the dialogue. Well done!

Very good story. you did a nice job on the emotions and the dialogue. Well done!
10/29/2010 c1 Vanell
I really enjoyed this little one shot story of the hotel time. I always like canon stories filling in the bits and pieces around Twilight itself (the best book of the series) with insights into the Cullens and how they perceive Edward and Bella's relationship. Alice and Jasper are my favourite couple.
I really enjoyed this little one shot story of the hotel time. I always like canon stories filling in the bits and pieces around Twilight itself (the best book of the series) with insights into the Cullens and how they perceive Edward and Bella's relationship. Alice and Jasper are my favourite couple.
2/21/2010 c1 twilightobsessed40873a
That was awesome. I've always wanted to know what they where thinking when Bella was asleep
That was awesome. I've always wanted to know what they where thinking when Bella was asleep