for The Mission That Changed Our Lives11/24/2020 c1 ImaBelieverOptimism
When I first got hooked on NaruIno (My otp is ShikaIno) , I searched for stories, but I agree! They're short one-shots. I was like man. Maybe I should start writing smh. But thanks for this four chapters! Imma continue reading now
When I first got hooked on NaruIno (My otp is ShikaIno) , I searched for stories, but I agree! They're short one-shots. I was like man. Maybe I should start writing smh. But thanks for this four chapters! Imma continue reading now
8/10/2011 c4 
4Donners
this is a good story with a lot of potenial and i look foward to the next chapter.
if your stuck why not have either ino use her family jutsu on the guard that has her 'body' and have the other guards killed and the imposter caught that way or have the ino the guard has as a shadow clone and have the real ino catch the imposter before the guards realise whats happening
4Donnersthis is a good story with a lot of potenial and i look foward to the next chapter.
if your stuck why not have either ino use her family jutsu on the guard that has her 'body' and have the other guards killed and the imposter caught that way or have the ino the guard has as a shadow clone and have the real ino catch the imposter before the guards realise whats happening
8/19/2008 c3 2TheFinalFighter
Hey heres's a suggestion maybe you could could explain there (Ino and Naruto) plan to expose and capturemthe real prince and in order for that to happen they must be stealthy and quick nimble and such. also the impsoter trying to kill naruto in order to get ino i dunno if this helps but I'm just putting it out there. Also I really enjoy this story!
TheFinalFighter
2TheFinalFighterHey heres's a suggestion maybe you could could explain there (Ino and Naruto) plan to expose and capturemthe real prince and in order for that to happen they must be stealthy and quick nimble and such. also the impsoter trying to kill naruto in order to get ino i dunno if this helps but I'm just putting it out there. Also I really enjoy this story!
TheFinalFighter
4/20/2008 c2 2Kitsune6
The story was fine, but you REALLY need to put thoughts in italics. It's very hard to distinguish them otherwise.
2Kitsune6The story was fine, but you REALLY need to put thoughts in italics. It's very hard to distinguish them otherwise.
4/3/2008 c2 16Obsessivetoapoint
i love the idea of the couple thing. Great start! update soon!
Ja ne!
16Obsessivetoapointi love the idea of the couple thing. Great start! update soon!
Ja ne!
3/21/2008 c1 FusionNT
Pretty good start, I liked it ^^
I would recommand not put the status of the story to "complete" till it's complete. I was expecting a one-shot, and now I am putting the story on Story alerts, which is good :)
Keep up the good story !
Pretty good start, I liked it ^^
I would recommand not put the status of the story to "complete" till it's complete. I was expecting a one-shot, and now I am putting the story on Story alerts, which is good :)
Keep up the good story !
3/20/2008 c1 Namikaze777
This is pretty good, please continue. BTW, you said "our favorite pink wearing kunoichi being bored as hell."
Ino doesn't wear pink, she wears purple. Just letting you know that.
This is pretty good, please continue. BTW, you said "our favorite pink wearing kunoichi being bored as hell."
Ino doesn't wear pink, she wears purple. Just letting you know that.
3/20/2008 c1 buzzbumble
that was pretty good for the first chapter.. no mistakes of grammar etc that i could find... CAn't wait till you dish out more chapters!
that was pretty good for the first chapter.. no mistakes of grammar etc that i could find... CAn't wait till you dish out more chapters!