
4/24/2010 c8 Hellyeah13-04
I like it please keep writing!
I like it please keep writing!
5/31/2009 c8 Zuki Miyazaki
ah you have to continue i want to know what happened im so in depth with this story i kept trying to find the next button ...but it wasn't there please keep going.
ah you have to continue i want to know what happened im so in depth with this story i kept trying to find the next button ...but it wasn't there please keep going.
12/30/2008 c8
5Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram
WO HO! THIS WAS AWESOME! XD Ive been waitin for this chapter for eva!

WO HO! THIS WAS AWESOME! XD Ive been waitin for this chapter for eva!
10/3/2008 c7 Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram
Hey! :D Remember me! XD Sorry it took so long for me to read this, i didnt have a computer for the longest time, then the stupid huricane came and washed away my house, but now im hangin out at my aunts house! Yay! ^_^
awesome chappy! I really liked this one! :D Your doing really good with the story, keep up the good work!
Hey! :D Remember me! XD Sorry it took so long for me to read this, i didnt have a computer for the longest time, then the stupid huricane came and washed away my house, but now im hangin out at my aunts house! Yay! ^_^
awesome chappy! I really liked this one! :D Your doing really good with the story, keep up the good work!
8/1/2008 c7
4ShikaKibaShinoGal
HA ha! Denial is what there all in. Its funny. Can't wait till next chapter!

HA ha! Denial is what there all in. Its funny. Can't wait till next chapter!
7/28/2008 c6
5Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram
WO HO! YOU Go Girl! I Loved the Chapter! Yes, i just got back internet, but only for now, its temporary. ill try to get internet at my house pretty soon. so ill check out your other stories later! bies!

WO HO! YOU Go Girl! I Loved the Chapter! Yes, i just got back internet, but only for now, its temporary. ill try to get internet at my house pretty soon. so ill check out your other stories later! bies!
6/23/2008 c5 Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram
WOO HOO! ^_^ I LOVES IT! hehehe, ah, the sluts try to hard, i feal sory for them...*snicker!* hehehehe!
Good job on the chapter! Im realy lovin' the story! keep up the good work!
WOO HOO! ^_^ I LOVES IT! hehehe, ah, the sluts try to hard, i feal sory for them...*snicker!* hehehehe!
Good job on the chapter! Im realy lovin' the story! keep up the good work!
6/23/2008 c5 Dark-Rei-Cloud
I love your OC story its really awesome! :D And i like how you make the chapters nice and long ^o^ pwease continue.
I love your OC story its really awesome! :D And i like how you make the chapters nice and long ^o^ pwease continue.