
1/16/2009 c1
4Northernsword
Hmm... Nice work. Wouldn't have guessed the director to be Cloud, but I guess a career in science wouldn't be too weird for him...

Hmm... Nice work. Wouldn't have guessed the director to be Cloud, but I guess a career in science wouldn't be too weird for him...
3/23/2008 c1
7Lilly Kim
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that's a really amazing story! The end's sad but the whole lab things are fantastic well-planned. Poor Cloud (as always, he only suffers) =/

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that's a really amazing story! The end's sad but the whole lab things are fantastic well-planned. Poor Cloud (as always, he only suffers) =/
3/23/2008 c1
15Flatlander
Thank you for that. I wrote this story yesterday in a burst of inspiration that involved the Lifestream. Strange, since I hadn't played FFVII in almost four years and watched Advent Children only when it was released.

Thank you for that. I wrote this story yesterday in a burst of inspiration that involved the Lifestream. Strange, since I hadn't played FFVII in almost four years and watched Advent Children only when it was released.
3/23/2008 c1
4SomniumSeeker
Amazing story. I'm no scientist, but everything you said about the scientific processes sounds so convincing! Your use of syntax gave the story a tone which fit the subject matter of the story; formal and logical, yet still flowing. I especially liked how Cloud referred to Aeris as a 'friend', and how in-character he seemed, age and past experiences considered. Wonderful rise and fall of action; when Rockwell was nervous, I was nervous. And the ending, oh the ending. The last sentence was so poignant, and summed the whole piece up fully. Basically you're my hero for the day. And it's a great story for Easter! Thanks for making my morning.

Amazing story. I'm no scientist, but everything you said about the scientific processes sounds so convincing! Your use of syntax gave the story a tone which fit the subject matter of the story; formal and logical, yet still flowing. I especially liked how Cloud referred to Aeris as a 'friend', and how in-character he seemed, age and past experiences considered. Wonderful rise and fall of action; when Rockwell was nervous, I was nervous. And the ending, oh the ending. The last sentence was so poignant, and summed the whole piece up fully. Basically you're my hero for the day. And it's a great story for Easter! Thanks for making my morning.