for its hard to explain4/11/2015 c1 PickyQueen
You spelled "Voldemort" incorrectly (among other things) in your summary, so you know.
You spelled "Voldemort" incorrectly (among other things) in your summary, so you know.
6/13/2014 c1 Ginny
Hahaha.
Hahaha!
This is terrible. I mean, I needed to see because of the summary. You spelled Voldemort wrong! How pathetic is that?
Hahaha.
Hahaha!
This is terrible. I mean, I needed to see because of the summary. You spelled Voldemort wrong! How pathetic is that?
6/13/2014 c1 Guest
Spell check is your friend!
Spell check is your friend!
6/13/2014 c1 Magicath
very good, bravo
very good, bravo
6/4/2012 c5 Epiphany Rising
I know this hasn't been updated in a while but wanted to let you know there was an app called OpenOffice. I use it a lot when writing and for school. It's a free (and copyright) friendly version of word.
I know this hasn't been updated in a while but wanted to let you know there was an app called OpenOffice. I use it a lot when writing and for school. It's a free (and copyright) friendly version of word.
8/5/2010 c5 holly
more please i cANcant wait for snape to find out whats been happing to hermione and im assuming it is snap with the other journal and that hermione just doesnt realize its a to way journal for communication
more please i cANcant wait for snape to find out whats been happing to hermione and im assuming it is snap with the other journal and that hermione just doesnt realize its a to way journal for communication
2/12/2010 c1 Anon
Do you not know what a beta reader is or what they do? Your story is horrible and painful to read with all of the mistakes. I would suggest utilizing a beta reader and re-posting your story.
Do you not know what a beta reader is or what they do? Your story is horrible and painful to read with all of the mistakes. I would suggest utilizing a beta reader and re-posting your story.
2/8/2010 c1 Melora
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . sapientimagic . com
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . sapientimagic . com
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
1/27/2010 c3 
7lightning strikes 101
wow!
haha, loved the end and severus' thoughts
cant wait for more!
~mE~
7lightning strikes 101wow!
haha, loved the end and severus' thoughts
cant wait for more!
~mE~
1/22/2010 c1 Happy
You should really read the books before you try to write fanfiction.
You should really read the books before you try to write fanfiction.
12/3/2009 c1 Epiphany Rising
I was looking forward to reading this but I couldn't get past the first paragraph. If you ever get this beta'd let me know.
The concept seems great though!
I was looking forward to reading this but I couldn't get past the first paragraph. If you ever get this beta'd let me know.
The concept seems great though!
8/14/2009 c1 10TsukiyoTenshi
I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT ALL THAT HAPPENED TO HERMIONE AND YET NO ONE EVEN NOTICES! IS EVERYONE THAT OBLIVIOUS TO WHAT'S HAPPENING TO HER? I have to read what's going to happen next!
I NEED to know what's going to happen to Hermione!
PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! (THIS WOULD MEAN ASAP!) ;)
10TsukiyoTenshiI CAN'T BELIEVE THAT ALL THAT HAPPENED TO HERMIONE AND YET NO ONE EVEN NOTICES! IS EVERYONE THAT OBLIVIOUS TO WHAT'S HAPPENING TO HER? I have to read what's going to happen next!
I NEED to know what's going to happen to Hermione!
PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! (THIS WOULD MEAN ASAP!) ;)