12/13/2008 c24 2swordmaster003
I really liked how you strethened the relationships of father and son between Spyro and Falzar and Mark and Sedro. And why is Reven back on the evil side? I smell betrayel and corruption in his veins!
I really liked how you strethened the relationships of father and son between Spyro and Falzar and Mark and Sedro. And why is Reven back on the evil side? I smell betrayel and corruption in his veins!
12/13/2008 c23 swordmaster003
Wow...Tyreal just got owned! Lol! Very nice dude. The descriptions of the fighting were phenomial!
Wow...Tyreal just got owned! Lol! Very nice dude. The descriptions of the fighting were phenomial!
8/27/2008 c17 swordmaster003
Cool Mark isn't blind, has a awsome sword, and we now are going to see some epic battles whoo hoo!
Cool Mark isn't blind, has a awsome sword, and we now are going to see some epic battles whoo hoo!
8/23/2008 c16 swordmaster003
Lot's of darkness in the story. It's awsome! I can't wait to see a confrontation between Mark and Tyranus!
Lot's of darkness in the story. It's awsome! I can't wait to see a confrontation between Mark and Tyranus!
8/23/2008 c15 swordmaster003
Wow this is one good chapter. Also I like that Cynder and Spyro are actully falling in love.
Wow this is one good chapter. Also I like that Cynder and Spyro are actully falling in love.
8/23/2008 c14 swordmaster003
Well Mephiles is defiently pure evil. Also that was the easiest boss battle ever! Hahahaha I would laugh if the boss was actully that easy if your story was a game.
Well Mephiles is defiently pure evil. Also that was the easiest boss battle ever! Hahahaha I would laugh if the boss was actully that easy if your story was a game.