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3/31/2008 c1 1Rose Crest
I didn't get a chance to read the whole story, but i really enjoyed it. I haven't seen Bend it like Beckham in a long time but this really helped me recap what happend. I really like the part were Jules and Jess met Rosie i just thought that it was really realistic. I think you chose a good topic to continue writing and i really really enjoyed reading it.
3/26/2008 c1 33Crystalkei
i like the idea of a journal to portray your story.

There's a couple of times where you used "where" when you should have used "were."

Hope to see more. If you need any proofing help, let me know. ;)

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