
9/28/2010 c1
3Kitaliah
I understand exactly where you're coming from, but she didn't leave it completely open ended, she implied that Kel and Dom would have a part together in the ending.

I understand exactly where you're coming from, but she didn't leave it completely open ended, she implied that Kel and Dom would have a part together in the ending.
3/25/2008 c1
49xxTunstall Chickxx
Uhmm... I don't really like Cleon/Kel pairings but it was well written, keep it up!
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx

Uhmm... I don't really like Cleon/Kel pairings but it was well written, keep it up!
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx
3/25/2008 c1 amarylisdead
It was definitely good, and yeah i have to admit the thought of Cleon marrying for money was also a bit unsettling to me. You have good grammar.
It was definitely good, and yeah i have to admit the thought of Cleon marrying for money was also a bit unsettling to me. You have good grammar.
3/25/2008 c1
8romance-addict44
That was great! I thought it was a great ending to the books, though I did like the one that was actually used too.

That was great! I thought it was a great ending to the books, though I did like the one that was actually used too.