for Why Him?5/9/2010 c13 AstoriaReid
why did you stop :O
i want to read more... where's the next chapter you promised:(
why did you stop :O
i want to read more... where's the next chapter you promised:(
6/7/2009 c12 YouSexyDevil
Well, the evil plan that Ino pulled wasn't much of an evil plan. Actually, it was evil but it was a total failure. Didn't Sakura say something like: "Naruto's throwing a surprise party for Sasuke. Lets take this as a perfect opportunity to split 'em up!"?
*sigh* I was expecting something to happen because of it, but nothing ever did. Except the flowers, but if Sasuke found Naruto vomiting or vise versa, that wouldn't cause them to split up.
Anywayz! lol Loved the lemon. *wink*
I have one more chapter to go before I'm completely caught up. It's late though, so until next time! Yay!
Well, the evil plan that Ino pulled wasn't much of an evil plan. Actually, it was evil but it was a total failure. Didn't Sakura say something like: "Naruto's throwing a surprise party for Sasuke. Lets take this as a perfect opportunity to split 'em up!"?
*sigh* I was expecting something to happen because of it, but nothing ever did. Except the flowers, but if Sasuke found Naruto vomiting or vise versa, that wouldn't cause them to split up.
Anywayz! lol Loved the lemon. *wink*
I have one more chapter to go before I'm completely caught up. It's late though, so until next time! Yay!
6/6/2009 c6 YouSexyDevil
OMG! I had to re-read this story until chapter 6 when I noticed this familiar story was barely updated. I have to stop here though because it's late, but I'll surely continue tomorrow. How awesome! -You updated so much, this is GREAT! I wish I could skip ahead, but I have to read on to re-fresh my memory. *smiles*
I should have added this story to my story alert.
A complaint (a little late for complaints, but hear me out):
Chapter 5, somewhere in the middle of the chapter:
"Naruto, please," Sakura didn't know that she could have done that, she hadn't been thinking. What had she done? She had hurt Naruto and made him pass out. She had made him cry in his unconsciousness. She was an awful person, a truly awful, terrible, foul, heartless person. How could she do such a thing to the boy she thought of as a little brother? "I'm sorry. I'm so, so, so sorry! Please wake up!"
Chapter 6, somewhere in the middle of the chapter:
"So how will we break them up?" Sakura's voice sounded as her veil of sorrow lifted.
*confused* Yeah, she cared at first, but now she could careless about Naruto and what he feels about the situation. Didn't Sakura think of him as a little brother? Why does that change so suddenly? Is it Ino's fault?
I think this is kind of what I was a upset about the first time I reviewed this story. It didn't make a lot of sense. You replied I think, but I can't remember if you had explained the reasons for Sakura's actions.
Was she just sorry at first because she made Naruto pass out? But she was still angry about him taking Sasuke away, right? Still... if she intends to break them up, that means she doesn't care about Naruto's feelings, and it was a lie that she thought of him as a brother because if that were so she would have cared. (See, that's what confuses me.) Why did you write that she thinks of him as a little brother when indeed she doesn't? *mumbles* Maybe she's just stup*d. That would explain everything...
OMG! I had to re-read this story until chapter 6 when I noticed this familiar story was barely updated. I have to stop here though because it's late, but I'll surely continue tomorrow. How awesome! -You updated so much, this is GREAT! I wish I could skip ahead, but I have to read on to re-fresh my memory. *smiles*
I should have added this story to my story alert.
A complaint (a little late for complaints, but hear me out):
Chapter 5, somewhere in the middle of the chapter:
"Naruto, please," Sakura didn't know that she could have done that, she hadn't been thinking. What had she done? She had hurt Naruto and made him pass out. She had made him cry in his unconsciousness. She was an awful person, a truly awful, terrible, foul, heartless person. How could she do such a thing to the boy she thought of as a little brother? "I'm sorry. I'm so, so, so sorry! Please wake up!"
Chapter 6, somewhere in the middle of the chapter:
"So how will we break them up?" Sakura's voice sounded as her veil of sorrow lifted.
*confused* Yeah, she cared at first, but now she could careless about Naruto and what he feels about the situation. Didn't Sakura think of him as a little brother? Why does that change so suddenly? Is it Ino's fault?
I think this is kind of what I was a upset about the first time I reviewed this story. It didn't make a lot of sense. You replied I think, but I can't remember if you had explained the reasons for Sakura's actions.
Was she just sorry at first because she made Naruto pass out? But she was still angry about him taking Sasuke away, right? Still... if she intends to break them up, that means she doesn't care about Naruto's feelings, and it was a lie that she thought of him as a brother because if that were so she would have cared. (See, that's what confuses me.) Why did you write that she thinks of him as a little brother when indeed she doesn't? *mumbles* Maybe she's just stup*d. That would explain everything...
2/17/2009 c12 
14mmm.kai.mmm
damn that was a close one with the flowers...
but it was a gurd party :D
lol i liked kibas present :P
the lemon was good :D
loved it :D
hope all these reviews made up for my severe lack of them for a while :(
good luck!
ja ne!
m.kai.m
14mmm.kai.mmmdamn that was a close one with the flowers...
but it was a gurd party :D
lol i liked kibas present :P
the lemon was good :D
loved it :D
hope all these reviews made up for my severe lack of them for a while :(
good luck!
ja ne!
m.kai.m
2/17/2009 c11 mmm.kai.mmm
haha fat sasuke XD
damn sakura and ino just don't get it... FACK OFF BITCHESS
yay specail appearance by gaara! i love gaara! and he had good news! thats AMAZING :D
right, only have one more chappie to review :D
ONWARDS!
m.kai.m
haha fat sasuke XD
damn sakura and ino just don't get it... FACK OFF BITCHESS
yay specail appearance by gaara! i love gaara! and he had good news! thats AMAZING :D
right, only have one more chappie to review :D
ONWARDS!
m.kai.m
2/17/2009 c10 mmm.kai.mmm
ack! i've been bad! very very bad! i haven't been reading your wonderful story!
but now i shall attempt to review the next two chapters aswell :D
haha ayame and the old man made me laugh :P
ahh the suprise party is going to be great :D
ONWARDS!
m.kai.m
ack! i've been bad! very very bad! i haven't been reading your wonderful story!
but now i shall attempt to review the next two chapters aswell :D
haha ayame and the old man made me laugh :P
ahh the suprise party is going to be great :D
ONWARDS!
m.kai.m
2/16/2009 c12 kitsunelova
wow im so glad sasuke and naruto arent letting ino and sakura ruin thier relationship
wonderfull story keep it up
wow im so glad sasuke and naruto arent letting ino and sakura ruin thier relationship
wonderfull story keep it up
1/11/2009 c12 xxABANDONEDxx
Cool chapter, can't wait to read more. I actually read this a few days ago, just didn't get a chance to review because my computer decided it wanted to freeze up and not work fast enough for my liking.
Cool chapter, can't wait to read more. I actually read this a few days ago, just didn't get a chance to review because my computer decided it wanted to freeze up and not work fast enough for my liking.
12/28/2008 c12 blue
i hope u update soon please
i hope u update soon please
12/28/2008 c12 Lanchia-san
hahahahahahahahah naruto got some hapiness i'm glad cause when you said gaara was coming with shocking news i was like KAMI-SAMA PLEASE HELP!XP
hahahahahahahahah naruto got some hapiness i'm glad cause when you said gaara was coming with shocking news i was like KAMI-SAMA PLEASE HELP!XP
12/28/2008 c7 Lanchia-san
so cute and fluffy im gonna die trying to keep my fangirlish side in check lol XD
so cute and fluffy im gonna die trying to keep my fangirlish side in check lol XD
12/28/2008 c12 shadowphoenix143
Man, Sakura and Ino are insane! Why haven't they been diagnosed as mentally unstable yet! Great chapter!
Man, Sakura and Ino are insane! Why haven't they been diagnosed as mentally unstable yet! Great chapter!