
11/7/2011 c1 Deadly Crow
Great poem, it feels coming out Tia's feelings, it almost express the way things happen to her.
Short, but that's not the point, loved it!.
★★★★
~The Keeper Of Lore
Great poem, it feels coming out Tia's feelings, it almost express the way things happen to her.
Short, but that's not the point, loved it!.
★★★★
~The Keeper Of Lore
6/17/2008 c1
29Butterfree
I just love your peoms ^^
Great job on making it sound like these words are actually coming out of Tio/Tia's mouth. A lot of authors can make their poem sound in-character, but you not only did that but also made it sound realistic; like it was something that Tio would've said to Zatch/Gash if she did admit her feelings.
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

I just love your peoms ^^
Great job on making it sound like these words are actually coming out of Tio/Tia's mouth. A lot of authors can make their poem sound in-character, but you not only did that but also made it sound realistic; like it was something that Tio would've said to Zatch/Gash if she did admit her feelings.
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)