for Twilight Academy Confectionary Competition3/20/2009 c2 Edwardcullenxox6
hayy good job with this story. I think the story is a great idea
you should definatly continue
hayy good job with this story. I think the story is a great idea
you should definatly continue
9/19/2008 c2 
3EclecticProse
OK honestly this is really OOC! and it is kinda herd to read i mean Emmett saying delicious, come on now
3EclecticProseOK honestly this is really OOC! and it is kinda herd to read i mean Emmett saying delicious, come on now
4/14/2008 c2 16tiamat100
Wow, this is great! How come they all eat food though? Are thye not vampires in this?
Anyway, its great. Please write more soon!
16tiamat100Wow, this is great! How come they all eat food though? Are thye not vampires in this?
Anyway, its great. Please write more soon!
3/31/2008 c1 3MoonRiver13
Emmett Alice and Edward can't be related because Rosalie and Jasper are twins, Emmett-Rosalie
Alice- Jasper
It would be like marrying or going out with or kissing your relative...
MoonRiver13
3MoonRiver13Emmett Alice and Edward can't be related because Rosalie and Jasper are twins, Emmett-Rosalie
Alice- Jasper
It would be like marrying or going out with or kissing your relative...
MoonRiver13
3/31/2008 c2 Sarahmouse123
it sound sreally cool i was just wondering edward os a player cause it kind of sounds like he is
it sound sreally cool i was just wondering edward os a player cause it kind of sounds like he is
3/30/2008 c1 edwardsgirl2179
i like it it is pretty good and i think you should keep going with the story!
i like it it is pretty good and i think you should keep going with the story!