
9/13/2008 c1
102The North Wyn
I like the look you take at Allan's life. It's quite interesting and sheds some light on future decisions he makes. Good job!

I like the look you take at Allan's life. It's quite interesting and sheds some light on future decisions he makes. Good job!
4/4/2008 c1
55JennMel
Definitely liking where you're going with this, it's rare to see a well written back-story. Keep it up!

Definitely liking where you're going with this, it's rare to see a well written back-story. Keep it up!