for Some Assembly Required11/7/2008 c1 
4Lowar
That's cool. 'Just before the store closed' is an excellent ending that let's a reader use their imagination. Keep up the good work. :D
4LowarThat's cool. 'Just before the store closed' is an excellent ending that let's a reader use their imagination. Keep up the good work. :D
9/22/2008 c1 39Karsten69
*giggles* *giggles even more* *laughs like a crazy person* I like this story.
39Karsten69*giggles* *giggles even more* *laughs like a crazy person* I like this story.
8/8/2008 c1 N.H.Keys
aww that was cool i always saw those 2 liveing together when they were older kagami cuz she could never get a boy and konata cuz she could not pay rent on her own hahaha jk
aww that was cool i always saw those 2 liveing together when they were older kagami cuz she could never get a boy and konata cuz she could not pay rent on her own hahaha jk
7/27/2008 c1 Anon
Very cute. Really liked it.
Very cute. Really liked it.
5/4/2008 c1 8Big Bad Sheep
Aha~ That was really cute, and really well written. The two ending lines are my favourite, just because it of what it implies.
8Big Bad SheepAha~ That was really cute, and really well written. The two ending lines are my favourite, just because it of what it implies.
4/3/2008 c1 Do I have to enter a name
This was really cute, well-written, and in-character. If they were moving in together and if they were together -that- way (if only...), I think that's totally how they would act. Even the physical affection and kissing reflected them. You did a great job in a really short story. I think you should do more. We need a little more not-crap around here, anyway...
This was really cute, well-written, and in-character. If they were moving in together and if they were together -that- way (if only...), I think that's totally how they would act. Even the physical affection and kissing reflected them. You did a great job in a really short story. I think you should do more. We need a little more not-crap around here, anyway...
3/31/2008 c1 70Sheo Darren
Aw.
^_^
Welcome back, MJP-san. I truly, madly, dearly missed your work- and I am glad you are still as good as ever.
70Sheo DarrenAw.
^_^
Welcome back, MJP-san. I truly, madly, dearly missed your work- and I am glad you are still as good as ever.
3/30/2008 c1 Ntizzle
Oh my gosh! I almost exploded from the cuteness! Please tell me your making more with longer chapters! o I loved it!
Oh my gosh! I almost exploded from the cuteness! Please tell me your making more with longer chapters! o I loved it!
3/30/2008 c1 6KonaKaga
That was so fluffy! / I laughed when Kagami asked/said that they wouldn't two seperate beds. Good job, I can't wait for more!
6KonaKagaThat was so fluffy! / I laughed when Kagami asked/said that they wouldn't two seperate beds. Good job, I can't wait for more!
3/30/2008 c1 7Saharet
Yay! First review ^^
Pretty amazing story I have to say, I was wondering where this was going but I wasn't disapointed. Some parts were confusing, but it may be because my english isn't perfect yet and I lack sleep right now
Anyway, welcome to the growing masses of L*S story! XD
You are going to write more, arent't you? I hope so, I liked it a lot!
-VaMP
7SaharetYay! First review ^^
Pretty amazing story I have to say, I was wondering where this was going but I wasn't disapointed. Some parts were confusing, but it may be because my english isn't perfect yet and I lack sleep right now
Anyway, welcome to the growing masses of L*S story! XD
You are going to write more, arent't you? I hope so, I liked it a lot!
-VaMP