for A Return Engagement3/10/2021 c5 297699767660
i don't know if you're ever going to read this but i really appreciate and am so grateful to yoi for writing Rules of Engagement the sequel, A Return Engagement. they are both precious gems.
honestly and personall, i've never read any NaruMai fic like yours. they're just... so fresh and different, your character study is immaculate, the humour is refreshing and hilarious (which is just something i need among the oceans of angst NaruMais), and you really have a way in narrating and writing Naru's unusual thought process (and other characters really), it's simply breathtaking and i adore that ability of yours so much. i just, really appreciate the things you put into your works.
the latest updated dated back in 2009 and i can't say i'm not heartbroken that it's discontinued, but again i'm so grateful you wrote these two works... if you ever want to continue this someday somehow, i'll be you and your fics' biggest fan.
i don't know if you're ever going to read this but i really appreciate and am so grateful to yoi for writing Rules of Engagement the sequel, A Return Engagement. they are both precious gems.
honestly and personall, i've never read any NaruMai fic like yours. they're just... so fresh and different, your character study is immaculate, the humour is refreshing and hilarious (which is just something i need among the oceans of angst NaruMais), and you really have a way in narrating and writing Naru's unusual thought process (and other characters really), it's simply breathtaking and i adore that ability of yours so much. i just, really appreciate the things you put into your works.
the latest updated dated back in 2009 and i can't say i'm not heartbroken that it's discontinued, but again i'm so grateful you wrote these two works... if you ever want to continue this someday somehow, i'll be you and your fics' biggest fan.
3/10/2021 c4 297699767660
"This house needs to be burned. There isn't any other solution," remarked Naru.
Mai's eyes widened. "The house is so haunted that you can tell that just from the outside?"
"Who said anything about haunted? It's hideous. Burning is the only cure for ugly this severe,"
god how did you manage to make Naru even more hilarious than he is in Rules of Engagement? ㅠㅠ it's beyond amazing how he's serious and hilarious at the same time. i do love angst NaruMai from time to time, but god do i appreciate NaruMai fics with good humour EVEN MORE. like, they're extremely rare. and god you write the best NaruMai ever, and i just really love the humour.
"This house needs to be burned. There isn't any other solution," remarked Naru.
Mai's eyes widened. "The house is so haunted that you can tell that just from the outside?"
"Who said anything about haunted? It's hideous. Burning is the only cure for ugly this severe,"
god how did you manage to make Naru even more hilarious than he is in Rules of Engagement? ㅠㅠ it's beyond amazing how he's serious and hilarious at the same time. i do love angst NaruMai from time to time, but god do i appreciate NaruMai fics with good humour EVEN MORE. like, they're extremely rare. and god you write the best NaruMai ever, and i just really love the humour.
3/10/2021 c3 297699767660
She was a peahen to Naru's showy peacock—an attentive and appreciative, though not uncritical, audience, with skills of her own, but content to leave him center stage.
beautiful, amazing, and accurate
She was a peahen to Naru's showy peacock—an attentive and appreciative, though not uncritical, audience, with skills of her own, but content to leave him center stage.
beautiful, amazing, and accurate
12/24/2020 c3 
4fairydares
"At this rate (almost as fast as Naru's average speed, in pedestrian zones), the boy's driving was going to give him grey hair even before his refusal to give up his telekinesis entirely was. It was enough to have Lin clipping Clairol coupons, hiding them in a stash in his desk"
Whoever wrote this was having the time of their freakin life
4fairydares"At this rate (almost as fast as Naru's average speed, in pedestrian zones), the boy's driving was going to give him grey hair even before his refusal to give up his telekinesis entirely was. It was enough to have Lin clipping Clairol coupons, hiding them in a stash in his desk"
Whoever wrote this was having the time of their freakin life
7/4/2017 c5 1WildKat25ShadowWolf13
I was re-reading some old Ghost Hunt fics and came across yours again. I was hoping you had perhaps finished the sequel, but I guess life must have gotten in the way. I loved your first part and the sequel so far regardless! Thanks for keeping your work up for others to enjoy just as I do!
1WildKat25ShadowWolf13I was re-reading some old Ghost Hunt fics and came across yours again. I was hoping you had perhaps finished the sequel, but I guess life must have gotten in the way. I loved your first part and the sequel so far regardless! Thanks for keeping your work up for others to enjoy just as I do!
1/31/2017 c5 kuroicalidra
I hope that you will be able to finish this story at some point; I enjoy the direction it's going, and would like to see more. If you're still dealing with students ravaging the English language, I understand the desire to not write anymore. I will just have to keep an eye on this.
I hope that you will be able to finish this story at some point; I enjoy the direction it's going, and would like to see more. If you're still dealing with students ravaging the English language, I understand the desire to not write anymore. I will just have to keep an eye on this.
8/12/2016 c5 391mutemuia
Just a pity you abandoned this story. U hope some day we'll know what happens there, and how their relationship evolves.
391mutemuiaJust a pity you abandoned this story. U hope some day we'll know what happens there, and how their relationship evolves.
10/30/2015 c5 3Griffalope
Continue. I beg of you. The relationship between Naru and Mai is so interesting! I'm going to follow this story now, and anxiously await your next update.
3GriffalopeContinue. I beg of you. The relationship between Naru and Mai is so interesting! I'm going to follow this story now, and anxiously await your next update.
7/20/2015 c5 One with the Wind
I eealise this has not been updated in a while, but I'm holding out hope! Please update soon! This is a fantastic start to the story!
I eealise this has not been updated in a while, but I'm holding out hope! Please update soon! This is a fantastic start to the story!
5/17/2015 c5 tih.brandt
It's really a shame that this story has been abandoned, I just love how Naru act in this fic, and the other's ( mostly Lin, really ) reactions to him, it's so damn funny.
It's really a shame that this story has been abandoned, I just love how Naru act in this fic, and the other's ( mostly Lin, really ) reactions to him, it's so damn funny.
12/19/2014 c5 nouga
Please continue :(
Please continue :(