for Abandonment7/19/2009 c1 
4Kikan
aw! that was really sad! and i liked it! =D you're a good writer, i think you should write a story about sakura as a run-away-ninja and then sasuke, naruto and kakashi find out and they try to get her back. keep writing! ^_^
4Kikanaw! that was really sad! and i liked it! =D you're a good writer, i think you should write a story about sakura as a run-away-ninja and then sasuke, naruto and kakashi find out and they try to get her back. keep writing! ^_^
1/26/2009 c1 8High Summoner Sakura
That did not suck. I think that it would be cool if you continued this. Just one note of critisism; you used your instead of you're. Good job though! :)
8High Summoner SakuraThat did not suck. I think that it would be cool if you continued this. Just one note of critisism; you used your instead of you're. Good job though! :)
5/27/2008 c1 2XXX.bLack Lily bloSSom.XXX
This is actually my opinion, if you did continue your story... I'm sure it will be really beautiful... ^_^
2XXX.bLack Lily bloSSom.XXXThis is actually my opinion, if you did continue your story... I'm sure it will be really beautiful... ^_^
4/11/2008 c1 19krazykoreangurl
It so doesn't suck! Here r some tips: Y don't u show how Itachi and Sakura met? The scenes that she experienced when people called her "Forehead Girl," and said "Your annoying", and "Your to weak always needing protection," and "Sakura, you not fit to be a kunoichi. Just give up and become a civilian." Hope I helped! Can't wait until the next chapter!
19krazykoreangurlIt so doesn't suck! Here r some tips: Y don't u show how Itachi and Sakura met? The scenes that she experienced when people called her "Forehead Girl," and said "Your annoying", and "Your to weak always needing protection," and "Sakura, you not fit to be a kunoichi. Just give up and become a civilian." Hope I helped! Can't wait until the next chapter!
4/4/2008 c1 giggles9113
Yeah it didnt suck, it was actually good. Anyway why not make this into a longer greater awsomeness story. And maybe even include some Itachi/Sakura romance in it. But anyway you have the layout for a great story, ya should use it, anyway peace- Giggles
Yeah it didnt suck, it was actually good. Anyway why not make this into a longer greater awsomeness story. And maybe even include some Itachi/Sakura romance in it. But anyway you have the layout for a great story, ya should use it, anyway peace- Giggles
4/1/2008 c1 4AmY-DyLaN-SoHiA-aNiKi
It didn't suck!
I think this story is really cool and that you could make more chapters out of it!
Like, tell us about how Sakura fits in with the Akatsuki and how she get's stronger then meets up with Konoha again-this time against them! Then they'll be all like WHOA SAKURA! You just like almost killed Kakashi!
plz?
think about it!
AmY
4AmY-DyLaN-SoHiA-aNiKiIt didn't suck!
I think this story is really cool and that you could make more chapters out of it!
Like, tell us about how Sakura fits in with the Akatsuki and how she get's stronger then meets up with Konoha again-this time against them! Then they'll be all like WHOA SAKURA! You just like almost killed Kakashi!
plz?
think about it!
AmY