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6/9/2010 c1 1jade2nightwing
OMGOSH

they really r marryed. i love it
11/13/2009 c1 Wiiviewer
Great twist ending. I actually didn't see it coming. :D

So they are really engaged. LOL. It is a weird that she was so upset when he first came in. You wouldn't think she would react that way if they really were in love...but I guess the ending wouldn't work without it.
11/23/2008 c1 2Jeremy Shane
good story
4/28/2008 c1 5Lissien
Hey!

That was very good! Very well thought and finely written. And original too!

=]

I loved it. Nice work.

Cheers,

~Mellie~
4/9/2008 c1 5becca582
nice...too bad you didn't continue it.
4/4/2008 c1 Gabriela
i really liked this story and i hope u continue to write more :)
3/31/2008 c1 d
that was hilarious! although when did lois find out about clark's secret? although i guess that is beside the point. anyways i think you should expand on this. i would like to see more of them pretending to be a couple and more on chloe's reaction outside the door and her reaction to knowing she was pranked herself. anyways its whatever you want to do. great job.
3/31/2008 c1 5TaraLittle
That was great! :)
3/31/2008 c1 1sv-harryluv
great story! it was really funny.
3/31/2008 c1 31JustSuperMione
Dude I loved that it was ace... Very well thought out! Your style is fantastic! woop How did you think of this one!
3/31/2008 c1 3thekiller00
So Chloe's bachelorette party was like one for Lois as well, just without the other people knowing it. I am curious to see what happens in the next post.

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