for The Key To A Really Good Bachelorette Party11/13/2009 c1 Wiiviewer
Great twist ending. I actually didn't see it coming. :D
So they are really engaged. LOL. It is a weird that she was so upset when he first came in. You wouldn't think she would react that way if they really were in love...but I guess the ending wouldn't work without it.
Great twist ending. I actually didn't see it coming. :D
So they are really engaged. LOL. It is a weird that she was so upset when he first came in. You wouldn't think she would react that way if they really were in love...but I guess the ending wouldn't work without it.
4/28/2008 c1 
5Lissien
Hey!
That was very good! Very well thought and finely written. And original too!
=]
I loved it. Nice work.
Cheers,
~Mellie~
5LissienHey!
That was very good! Very well thought and finely written. And original too!
=]
I loved it. Nice work.
Cheers,
~Mellie~
4/4/2008 c1 Gabriela
i really liked this story and i hope u continue to write more :)
i really liked this story and i hope u continue to write more :)
3/31/2008 c1 d
that was hilarious! although when did lois find out about clark's secret? although i guess that is beside the point. anyways i think you should expand on this. i would like to see more of them pretending to be a couple and more on chloe's reaction outside the door and her reaction to knowing she was pranked herself. anyways its whatever you want to do. great job.
that was hilarious! although when did lois find out about clark's secret? although i guess that is beside the point. anyways i think you should expand on this. i would like to see more of them pretending to be a couple and more on chloe's reaction outside the door and her reaction to knowing she was pranked herself. anyways its whatever you want to do. great job.
3/31/2008 c1 31JustSuperMione
Dude I loved that it was ace... Very well thought out! Your style is fantastic! woop How did you think of this one!
31JustSuperMioneDude I loved that it was ace... Very well thought out! Your style is fantastic! woop How did you think of this one!
3/31/2008 c1 3thekiller00
So Chloe's bachelorette party was like one for Lois as well, just without the other people knowing it. I am curious to see what happens in the next post.
3thekiller00So Chloe's bachelorette party was like one for Lois as well, just without the other people knowing it. I am curious to see what happens in the next post.