9/22/2018 c1 bluedragonveldora
awwwwwwwwww... both Naruto and Hinata are soooo cuuteeeee . please update!
awwwwwwwwww... both Naruto and Hinata are soooo cuuteeeee . please update!
3/27/2013 c1 tim lee1
I like it! It seems like it needs a next part though. Just to see what Naruto thought of the fact that Hinata gave him a much needed smile.
I sure hope you continue all of your fics.
I like it! It seems like it needs a next part though. Just to see what Naruto thought of the fact that Hinata gave him a much needed smile.
I sure hope you continue all of your fics.
6/17/2009 c1 Perpetual159
Too beautiful! See, it's a small world, after all. It all started with a review by someone who had learned of my story by someone ELSE who made a comment on one of Charu-san's picture which stated that that it reminded her of my story (that picture was "kukuku" by the way).
(I know, complicated, but it'll make sense)... then I saw the little pictures Charu-san made of a scene of your story, Naruto's Awakening. Being that I have to go to work, I figured I'd just read a short story of yours; one, because I wanted to read the longer story with plenty of time; and two, if you have someone doing drawings for your story, it must be really good, and so... it was a wise choice. This story is too adorable for its own good, and now I can't wait to get out of work today so I can read your other stories.
See what a little inadvertent propaganda of my story does? Hahaha, that, and the fact that I just happen to be nosy :D
Too beautiful! See, it's a small world, after all. It all started with a review by someone who had learned of my story by someone ELSE who made a comment on one of Charu-san's picture which stated that that it reminded her of my story (that picture was "kukuku" by the way).
(I know, complicated, but it'll make sense)... then I saw the little pictures Charu-san made of a scene of your story, Naruto's Awakening. Being that I have to go to work, I figured I'd just read a short story of yours; one, because I wanted to read the longer story with plenty of time; and two, if you have someone doing drawings for your story, it must be really good, and so... it was a wise choice. This story is too adorable for its own good, and now I can't wait to get out of work today so I can read your other stories.
See what a little inadvertent propaganda of my story does? Hahaha, that, and the fact that I just happen to be nosy :D
1/28/2009 c1 6Missmybcmiyuki
aww, i'm glad this time she was able to cheer him up!
you go hinata! ^w^
aww, i'm glad this time she was able to cheer him up!
you go hinata! ^w^
5/8/2008 c1 braindamage730
great little 1 shot i enjoyed it very much and cant wait for up dates on ur other story want to see what kind of bloodline naruto got been urking me for like 8 months when i first read it even tried to get u on xbox live keep it coming when u can !
great little 1 shot i enjoyed it very much and cant wait for up dates on ur other story want to see what kind of bloodline naruto got been urking me for like 8 months when i first read it even tried to get u on xbox live keep it coming when u can !
3/31/2008 c1 Burnning Truth
Wow its been a long time, I was starting to wounder if you just left and stoped writting.
Which that in it self should be considered a crime your just to good a writer to just up and quit like that, but its good to see you back.
Now for this new one that you have here I must say that it has some great possibilities, I mean the first chapter here you could use to start up a new story, base a new one just on this chapter alone, or you could link any number of one-shots together.
All in all it makes for a great come back story.
P.S. I really mean that its great to have you back and I hope that you keep writing so many great stories and chapters to read, because I'll always be there to read them.
Wow its been a long time, I was starting to wounder if you just left and stoped writting.
Which that in it self should be considered a crime your just to good a writer to just up and quit like that, but its good to see you back.
Now for this new one that you have here I must say that it has some great possibilities, I mean the first chapter here you could use to start up a new story, base a new one just on this chapter alone, or you could link any number of one-shots together.
All in all it makes for a great come back story.
P.S. I really mean that its great to have you back and I hope that you keep writing so many great stories and chapters to read, because I'll always be there to read them.
3/31/2008 c1 Spreniel
I forgive you.
I'm just so glad you're back!
I have thank God for giving me patience, or else I think I might have torn apart my computer in anticiaption for new chapters to you're stories.
I think I need help.
'Cause whenever I'm NOT reading a 400+ page book. (which is rare because I finish them in a day and a half or less) I'm always reading stories on the internet. O_O
...
Oh well. Strangely it's an addiction I'm glad to have. ^_^
Sorry, I'm rambling.
Anyway, PLZ PLZ Update soon!
I forgive you.
I'm just so glad you're back!
I have thank God for giving me patience, or else I think I might have torn apart my computer in anticiaption for new chapters to you're stories.
I think I need help.
'Cause whenever I'm NOT reading a 400+ page book. (which is rare because I finish them in a day and a half or less) I'm always reading stories on the internet. O_O
...
Oh well. Strangely it's an addiction I'm glad to have. ^_^
Sorry, I'm rambling.
Anyway, PLZ PLZ Update soon!
3/31/2008 c1 2taintedlegacy
I don't know whether I'm happier that you wrote a really nice and sweet Naruhina story or that you're back. Eh...update soon!
I don't know whether I'm happier that you wrote a really nice and sweet Naruhina story or that you're back. Eh...update soon!
3/31/2008 c1 15Kazukagi
Hah, I knew you would be back! Nothing can keep a great writer down, even if it sets him back a year, they all bounce back!
As always, this little gem fails to disappoint. A clear view into Hinata's world, a struggle with herself and and undying love for our favorite idiot. Your prose is beautiful, the story of the girl, head of heels in love, whom after abandoning all hope, gets to hope again. I loved it. I'm looking forward to more of your little gems, as well as some follow ups to your other stories.
Thanks for the great read sir! And welcome back!
Hah, I knew you would be back! Nothing can keep a great writer down, even if it sets him back a year, they all bounce back!
As always, this little gem fails to disappoint. A clear view into Hinata's world, a struggle with herself and and undying love for our favorite idiot. Your prose is beautiful, the story of the girl, head of heels in love, whom after abandoning all hope, gets to hope again. I loved it. I'm looking forward to more of your little gems, as well as some follow ups to your other stories.
Thanks for the great read sir! And welcome back!