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4/1/2008 c1 1bigherb81
Nice cryptic opening for a story a way to hook in the reader keep them on their toes and guessing. I mean one may have an idea of who the girl is, but the mystery woman and the secret are a definate draw to this story. Really looking forward to seeing what happens next to see what the Ron man has gotten himself into this time.
4/1/2008 c1 loldead
Interesting way to keep a secret. I must tell you, you've got me hooked.

Here's to blo... I mean more in the future.
4/1/2008 c1 2Kwebs
Interesting fist chapter, Ron having to keep a secret from Kim. You gave us just enough to completely have me hooked with out knowing whats going on. Looking forward to your next update. Keep it up.
4/1/2008 c1 56MrDrP
Okay, I'm curious.

As always, well written. That said, I haven't a clue as to where this is going - other than by way of a place that Ron may describe as 500 miles of bad road after his tweaked GF figures out the sitch!

Looking forward to more.
4/1/2008 c1 4CajunBear73
Quite the cliffie opener.

A secret that Ron has to keep from KP that only he, Yori(?) and an unknown woman know?

It's not gonna be smooth sailing for Ron and Kim, ain't it?
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