Reviews: The Key To OneUpping A Lane

11/22/2013 c1

1madcloisfan
Loved it.

Sequel please?

9/18/2010 c1

6Ems-g
I loved how Shelby was the chaperone!

12/23/2009 c1 ShortLILPunk
I really enjoyed this little story! And I really love the way you think to write as well! I think you captured these characters perfectly without over doing them. Each simple sentence spoke very loudly! Great job!

11/23/2008 c1

2Jeremy Shane
good story

6/5/2008 c1 ajkldfs
this is really good!

i think you should add more chapters.

=)

4/5/2008 c1

4Silo666
kool man that was grate i wanna see more of that

4/5/2008 c1

4Thedivinesecretsof
lol! that was so cute

4/3/2008 c1

2Callista Wolfwood
Hahaha Poor Lucy!

4/2/2008 c1

66bsloths
That was awesome! Great job.

4/2/2008 c1 superman4ever
That was awesome! too bad that it's a short story thou.

4/1/2008 c1

40SailorMoonFanForever
That was really good! Hope you write more.

4/1/2008 c1

5TaraLittle
That was great! :)

4/1/2008 c1

3thekiller00
That is one hell of a way to one-up a Lane ! I am curious to see where this goes next.

4/1/2008 c1

31JustSuperMione
Brilliant. I loved that whole thing. Especially the end bit. What are they going to do next?