for Pomme De Sang4/3/2008 c4 
12Ruby-Wednesday
*adds to alerts*
I like this so far, especially this new side of Edward.
Having italics for speech is a little confusing though.
12Ruby-Wednesday*adds to alerts*
I like this so far, especially this new side of Edward.
Having italics for speech is a little confusing though.
4/3/2008 c3 TwilightHeaven
Wow that was hot! i can't wait to see how this story progresses, but i do have one issue...well this is more of a gramaticall thing...you dont actually have to listen though...its just that teh italics and no quotaion marks for the speech makes it a bit confusing...or i guess im just not used to it...besides that, this story is amazing!
Wow that was hot! i can't wait to see how this story progresses, but i do have one issue...well this is more of a gramaticall thing...you dont actually have to listen though...its just that teh italics and no quotaion marks for the speech makes it a bit confusing...or i guess im just not used to it...besides that, this story is amazing!
4/2/2008 c2 TwilightHeaven
wow..interesting...and i love the idea in the first chapter you got from the book.BTW the Anita Blake series sounds interesting...i might read those. I cant wait to read the rest of your story, it sound alot different than the usual, happy go lucky wedding stories.
wow..interesting...and i love the idea in the first chapter you got from the book.BTW the Anita Blake series sounds interesting...i might read those. I cant wait to read the rest of your story, it sound alot different than the usual, happy go lucky wedding stories.