for Alone7/15/2012 c1 Bananafishh
Oh lovely ending! So true for Naruto isn't it? I'm well jelly; my poetry always sounds so forced... But now I will write some and dedicate it to you!
Oh lovely ending! So true for Naruto isn't it? I'm well jelly; my poetry always sounds so forced... But now I will write some and dedicate it to you!
7/9/2012 c1 
1blahblahblah19229
Oh gosh; Forgot to review this when I favorited. I know this is like four years old, but truly a moving poem. Good job!
1blahblahblah19229Oh gosh; Forgot to review this when I favorited. I know this is like four years old, but truly a moving poem. Good job!
10/10/2010 c1 14fullmoonwolf950
omg that is so sad i can just imagine sasuke and naruto actually killing eachother laying next to eachother loooking up at the sky and then giving their last words to this world and their last breath left them. They finally feel in piece with the famillies they have lost and lingered for!
14fullmoonwolf950omg that is so sad i can just imagine sasuke and naruto actually killing eachother laying next to eachother loooking up at the sky and then giving their last words to this world and their last breath left them. They finally feel in piece with the famillies they have lost and lingered for!
10/14/2008 c1 ANiiM3CRAZii
Hi, I love your poem. It makes me feel sad that Naruto had to go through that.
Hi, I love your poem. It makes me feel sad that Naruto had to go through that.
4/22/2008 c1 5CorrectedByLazyAntics
wat a poem...it was heart wrenching. i loved it...do you write poems often?.?
5CorrectedByLazyAnticswat a poem...it was heart wrenching. i loved it...do you write poems often?.?
4/10/2008 c1 16thelonelyotakugirl
Cant' say its a grade A poem but its ok, I guess. You should work more on your poetry skills if your trying portraying emotions. Use symbolism if you must so that the poem would be shorter but better.
16thelonelyotakugirlCant' say its a grade A poem but its ok, I guess. You should work more on your poetry skills if your trying portraying emotions. Use symbolism if you must so that the poem would be shorter but better.