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1/7/2012 c5 3darkdancer1234
loved this
12/28/2010 c5 SimplyxApril
Awww Chelsea and John are so cute they need to kiss already gosh lol nice chapters
8/2/2009 c5 34RainbowShelby
i like it so far

shelbs
3/3/2009 c5 ILoveJohnCena54
such a great story!...please update soon!
2/25/2009 c5 Mishelle20
Great chapter. I really like these two together.
12/3/2008 c5 4HardyDXEvolutionChick
Please don't tell me this story as been putt on hold. It's so cute!
9/26/2008 c5 dreamin'BIG
this is great! keep going i want to see wat happens!
9/21/2008 c5 littleone999
i love the banter between the 2 of them. i can't wait to read more
9/21/2008 c5 dashingbailey
haha whore. this was a good chapter! update soon?
9/21/2008 c5 31heart2handgun
I'm likin' it so far. Only one small piece of advice. So it's clear who exactly is talking, and this makes your chapters seem longer, space things out a lot more with paragraphs. Try a new paragraph for each character's lines, that way you could have a statement by them, some action and then some more dialogue without confusing the readers as to who is speaking.

Just some advice. But otherwise, super cute chapter. He just wants to tap that ;)

-AJ
9/19/2008 c5 42Takersgurl35
John needs to be up on that, all this subtle flirting is making me nuts, they're perfect for each other and he's so protective of her. Great chapter.
9/19/2008 c5 12Jewelgirl04
Only you, Miss Brittany, could take the word "whore" and make it a joke. SERIOuSLY.

Loved the chapter, too cute. PMS! I miss you girly!
9/19/2008 c5 PermanentVacay
Great job! Update soon! I really want them to hook up!
9/18/2008 c5 NoLongerAFanfictionReader
love it so much! like seriously, i just read it and i'm gonna go read it again! update
9/18/2008 c5 5Pandora's Cube
Really liked it! Can't wait for more
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