for Milady Vampire5/10/2013 c5 Carriewhowasreading
While AU: this has been a real treat! One I sincerely hope you continue with this story!
While AU: this has been a real treat! One I sincerely hope you continue with this story!
5/8/2013 c5 James Birdsong
Cool story
Cool story
5/5/2008 c4 aragonite
Jeepers, I just have a feeling things are about to get complicated! Keep posting!
Jeepers, I just have a feeling things are about to get complicated! Keep posting!
5/4/2008 c4 
3DeletedAccountKCS
I like this muchly - your writing has an extremely intelligent tone that lends such volatile subject matter an enormous credibility. Well done!
Two tiny things:
“Do you realize that we got the most..." probably should be "we *have* got".
"I wondered if her obvious talent..." - I think the Doc Manager ate some of your words there...it's been doing that to me too, so don't feel badly. *kicks Doc Manager*
You'll please forgive me, but am I incredibly dense or did I miss something in a previous chapter (I apologise if I did, and disregard this if so) - but why do they ocasionally refer to the Lady (she is a lady? or no?) sometimes in a male sense? Sorry if I'm just forgetful if you already explained. Thanks!
Great chapter - you've obviously done an enormous amount of research, and I congratulate you on a job well done.
3DeletedAccountKCSI like this muchly - your writing has an extremely intelligent tone that lends such volatile subject matter an enormous credibility. Well done!
Two tiny things:
“Do you realize that we got the most..." probably should be "we *have* got".
"I wondered if her obvious talent..." - I think the Doc Manager ate some of your words there...it's been doing that to me too, so don't feel badly. *kicks Doc Manager*
You'll please forgive me, but am I incredibly dense or did I miss something in a previous chapter (I apologise if I did, and disregard this if so) - but why do they ocasionally refer to the Lady (she is a lady? or no?) sometimes in a male sense? Sorry if I'm just forgetful if you already explained. Thanks!
Great chapter - you've obviously done an enormous amount of research, and I congratulate you on a job well done.
4/26/2008 c1 susicar 2
"under the pen-name of Arthur Conan Doyle." Oh, how witty, very good! And the idea of add a new prologue IMHO is a very suitable decision. Well done, and i can't wait to read an update.
"under the pen-name of Arthur Conan Doyle." Oh, how witty, very good! And the idea of add a new prologue IMHO is a very suitable decision. Well done, and i can't wait to read an update.
4/24/2008 c3 3DeletedAccountKCS
Thanks for the message - I checked the story and was like, I already read this chapter...should've checked all 3 chappies.
Anyhow, I'm glad you added a preface, it adds to the authenticity very much. This line,
"You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed."
puzzled me a bit; it was a little hard to understand at least to me, in one long sentence.
However, your Watson voice is getting better and better - this really sounded like him. Great job, and I look forward to more!
3DeletedAccountKCSThanks for the message - I checked the story and was like, I already read this chapter...should've checked all 3 chappies.
Anyhow, I'm glad you added a preface, it adds to the authenticity very much. This line,
"You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed."
puzzled me a bit; it was a little hard to understand at least to me, in one long sentence.
However, your Watson voice is getting better and better - this really sounded like him. Great job, and I look forward to more!
4/23/2008 c1 4quibblequeen
Hah! Another Sherlock Holmes horror fic! I love these...And yours is admirably done. Good preface!
*You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed.*
This sentence is a little confusing...
*anyone will believe it anyway*
I believe that should be "in any case/event".
*runs off to read more*
Er..do you mean the Azores islands, by any chance?:-)
4quibblequeenHah! Another Sherlock Holmes horror fic! I love these...And yours is admirably done. Good preface!
*You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed.*
This sentence is a little confusing...
*anyone will believe it anyway*
I believe that should be "in any case/event".
*runs off to read more*
Er..do you mean the Azores islands, by any chance?:-)
4/22/2008 c2 Susicar
Pre-review: Sorry my dear, yet busy, tomorrow the "real" review (Thank for update)
Pre-review: Sorry my dear, yet busy, tomorrow the "real" review (Thank for update)
4/19/2008 c2 54Cat 2
salve (latin for hi)! I am a bigger fan of Anne Rice's Vampires so eugh! (latin for alas ect), but this is still a good story. apolgisies if any of the words are spelt incorrectly, I don't have a dictionary to hand, so must cope from memory.
54Cat 2salve (latin for hi)! I am a bigger fan of Anne Rice's Vampires so eugh! (latin for alas ect), but this is still a good story. apolgisies if any of the words are spelt incorrectly, I don't have a dictionary to hand, so must cope from memory.
4/18/2008 c2 3DeletedAccountKCS
Hmm, rather against my will you're very much intriguing me with the vampire lore - and that's hard to do, so well done indeed!
Your Victoriana is even better in this chapter, nicely executed. I have to say poor Watson is so very very forgiving and forgetting; love the dear chap...
Continue soon, please!
3DeletedAccountKCSHmm, rather against my will you're very much intriguing me with the vampire lore - and that's hard to do, so well done indeed!
Your Victoriana is even better in this chapter, nicely executed. I have to say poor Watson is so very very forgiving and forgetting; love the dear chap...
Continue soon, please!
4/10/2008 c1 Susicar again
Sorry, my dear, i read this yesterday at first glance, and today i reread. Well, now, more deeply i read, more i liked. I agree with KCS, the atmosphera is excellent, and H & W are perfectly in character.
PS: No problems for me with the language, because i speak only Spanish, but i understand English; of course, i enjoy immensely your work. Thank for sharing, and please, update soon.
Sorry, my dear, i read this yesterday at first glance, and today i reread. Well, now, more deeply i read, more i liked. I agree with KCS, the atmosphera is excellent, and H & W are perfectly in character.
PS: No problems for me with the language, because i speak only Spanish, but i understand English; of course, i enjoy immensely your work. Thank for sharing, and please, update soon.