for Krunior Love4/23/2024 c12 Mustangman425
Hello, i would like to follow this story but its difficult because there are duplicate areas and a few sections were its not formatted correctly. Any chance you can fix those things really quick? I wish i could.
Hello, i would like to follow this story but its difficult because there are duplicate areas and a few sections were its not formatted correctly. Any chance you can fix those things really quick? I wish i could.
3/28/2024 c1 Mustangman425
Just my thoughts….
I am very surprised no one on fanfiction has even thought to think about attacking Pablo and Jean for them accusing Kris of basically tearing Raintree apart. Pablo and Jean really didn’t look out for Kris because they let Kerry take advantage of Kris. Both of them should have been watching Kerry much closer since they were Kris’s guardian. Kris was a teenager who never had any solid family life or adult guidance. That really pissed me off bad how they treated her. Then you have Pablo treating and judging her even worst and he was a criminal who actually killed someone and never told anyone, but Kris kept all his secrets and he had the balls to judge Kris harshly.
I would have made someone kick Pablo’s abecause he thought he was tough and always tried to bully people. What a punk!
I wish I was a writer because I would explore all of that…food for thought.
Just my thoughts….
I am very surprised no one on fanfiction has even thought to think about attacking Pablo and Jean for them accusing Kris of basically tearing Raintree apart. Pablo and Jean really didn’t look out for Kris because they let Kerry take advantage of Kris. Both of them should have been watching Kerry much closer since they were Kris’s guardian. Kris was a teenager who never had any solid family life or adult guidance. That really pissed me off bad how they treated her. Then you have Pablo treating and judging her even worst and he was a criminal who actually killed someone and never told anyone, but Kris kept all his secrets and he had the balls to judge Kris harshly.
I would have made someone kick Pablo’s abecause he thought he was tough and always tried to bully people. What a punk!
I wish I was a writer because I would explore all of that…food for thought.
3/17/2024 c24 Mustangman425
No one ever writes about how Kris should confront Pablo about his past mistakes. If Pablo is going to confront her about her match races she should confront him about him making a mistake killing someone and all of his activities with Zack. Just a thought…
No one ever writes about how Kris should confront Pablo about his past mistakes. If Pablo is going to confront her about her match races she should confront him about him making a mistake killing someone and all of his activities with Zack. Just a thought…
6/1/2015 c36 writer09
I have never been this addicted to a story before. I can imagine everything, I can hear the character's voices. I LOVE the pairing of Calvin and Gillian and Laura and Bobby. I can hear Ken saying, "Laura's got class." - Oh My Lord. :)
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When I originally watched S4, I hated it the first go-round because I thought it sucked espically with not bringing back Shiek O, one of my all time FAV characters but years down the road, I watched it again and it was a really, really good season. I fell in love it so much! XO
I have never been this addicted to a story before. I can imagine everything, I can hear the character's voices. I LOVE the pairing of Calvin and Gillian and Laura and Bobby. I can hear Ken saying, "Laura's got class." - Oh My Lord. :)
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When I originally watched S4, I hated it the first go-round because I thought it sucked espically with not bringing back Shiek O, one of my all time FAV characters but years down the road, I watched it again and it was a really, really good season. I fell in love it so much! XO
310/14/2012 c1 samantha
I love it I can just picture it in my head
I love it I can just picture it in my head
2/20/2011 c64 wolfgirl731
there better b a sequel! if not, that would have to b 1 of the WORST endings in the world! If there isnt a sequel, then make 1! (if i come off rude, it's just that, u dont make a terrific story then leave with a cliffhanger emding without a sequel. It's mean amd like wildfire faniciftion lover cruelty! It's just wrong. =) )
there better b a sequel! if not, that would have to b 1 of the WORST endings in the world! If there isnt a sequel, then make 1! (if i come off rude, it's just that, u dont make a terrific story then leave with a cliffhanger emding without a sequel. It's mean amd like wildfire faniciftion lover cruelty! It's just wrong. =) )
12/12/2010 c64 Chlemi
Hi
I read your story and i loved it very much. :)
I've got a question. I'm from germany and I think a lot of german readers would prefer to read this too.
Would you allow me to translate this story into german and post it. I would make a note that I only translate it and you are the real author.
I would be really happy if i could do this, because this is an nice way to practice English for me:)
Sincerely yours
Ariane:)
Hi
I read your story and i loved it very much. :)
I've got a question. I'm from germany and I think a lot of german readers would prefer to read this too.
Would you allow me to translate this story into german and post it. I would make a note that I only translate it and you are the real author.
I would be really happy if i could do this, because this is an nice way to practice English for me:)
Sincerely yours
Ariane:)
3/6/2009 c57 TheTribalChief
Here are the prison terms for Kerry to serve for escape & attempted kidnapping:
5-10 years: Without Bail
25 years: Without Bail
Here are the prison terms for Kerry to serve for escape & attempted kidnapping:
5-10 years: Without Bail
25 years: Without Bail
3/6/2009 c55 TheTribalChief
I hate Kerry Connelly. He stole raintree's money. Kerry had the audacity to show his punk ass up and beg Kris for a second chance by telling her that he changed into a new man. I gotta give Kris credit for telling Kerry that she made a mistake for trusting him as her agent and as a boyfriend.
I hate Kerry Connelly. He stole raintree's money. Kerry had the audacity to show his punk ass up and beg Kris for a second chance by telling her that he changed into a new man. I gotta give Kris credit for telling Kerry that she made a mistake for trusting him as her agent and as a boyfriend.
3/6/2009 c26 TheTribalChief
Laura's with sleeping bobby. She's such a whore. Junior deserves someeone better than her. He should leave her and get back together with Kris, don't you agree?
Laura's with sleeping bobby. She's such a whore. Junior deserves someeone better than her. He should leave her and get back together with Kris, don't you agree?