7/16/2009 c9 XxdaniXx
it's making more sense now! 'I'm slowly falling in love with this story! awesome chapter!

7/16/2009 c5 XxdaniXx
OK...'I'm going to keep on going and hopefully the next chappie will fill my ichiruki needs...sorry but i hate ichihime, but this is a great story though so 'I'm sticking to it!

7/16/2009 c3 XxdaniXx
wow this is a great story so far!

looks like something interesting is gonna happen!

4/30/2009 c11 LotusFlower640
This sounds so interesting! I love this story so so so much! Nel's so cute!

4/30/2009 c7 LotusFlower640
Hi! I'm really liking your story! I like how Rukia and Ichigo almost meet but something happened. I also like how it's not rushed.

4/18/2009 c14 dethangelx
hey there! just wanted to comment about the note you have in this chapter about having some sort of 'sixth sense'.. i have it too! pretty freaky, right? i've had the good and the bad of it.. like in quiz shows, i'd miraculously hit the right answer even when i have really no idea (best example: math quiz bee, we had to write out the answer, and time was running out, so i just wrote the first number that came to mind, and yea it turned out to be the right one)..

and that time when a brown-black butterfly visited me and a friend while we were talking.. and i suddenly faced her and told her someone close to her will die.. and her aunt really died in an accident..

- but enough about that! your story is good! i'm reminded of a book i read.. about magicians and different dimensions.. hehe.. i wasn't too happy with senna's part here (i'm quite a loyal rukia fan), but rest assured, i understood that she and kaien were needed to portray that the main couple's lives were far from perfect before they met each other..

- i'm not done reading, but i had to comment here about your note (A/N), so..

12/6/2008 c7 kit-kate
i loved this chapter thing it was so good especially the dream thing ichigo had yay! Go ichiruki!

11/20/2008 c18 2jazzmin92
good job ! cant wait for the next update!