for In a Station of the Metro6/26/2008 c17 bleachfan
please ad the next chapter, i love this storry, its verry good and i cant get enough of it.
please ad the next chapter, i love this storry, its verry good and i cant get enough of it.
6/25/2008 c17 
6ObliviousWarrior89
Fan fucking tastic. I love it. Keep writing. Or I'll send someone to rough you up (like the new Stride Gum commercials with the big german strongman who rams the guy against a Coke machine until he spits it out) lol.
6ObliviousWarrior89Fan fucking tastic. I love it. Keep writing. Or I'll send someone to rough you up (like the new Stride Gum commercials with the big german strongman who rams the guy against a Coke machine until he spits it out) lol.
6/25/2008 c17 yumichan808
lol, ichigo has way to much on his mind, that he couldn't connect it! so slow! hHAHA
lol, ichigo has way to much on his mind, that he couldn't connect it! so slow! hHAHA
6/24/2008 c17 sakurax1314
Wow. Didn't see the baby docter coming! This was a really good chapter. And you can take ur time if the story is this good!
Thanks, and keep up the good work! ;)
Sakura
Wow. Didn't see the baby docter coming! This was a really good chapter. And you can take ur time if the story is this good!
Thanks, and keep up the good work! ;)
Sakura
6/24/2008 c17 MysteriousEyez
=O COuld it be our lil Rukia is pregnant! Not quite a shocker but cool nonetheless, update soon!
=O COuld it be our lil Rukia is pregnant! Not quite a shocker but cool nonetheless, update soon!
6/24/2008 c17 71Trumpet-Geek
First thing's first... It's spelled Grimmjow, with just one 'w.' Sorry, but that bothered me the whole time he was in the scene lol.
Second... It's too bad about the writer's block. Hopefully everything will work out for you. And haha.. Rukia's preggers. I don't normally like pregnancy stories... In fact I go out of my way not to read them. But I'll try this one out.
71Trumpet-GeekFirst thing's first... It's spelled Grimmjow, with just one 'w.' Sorry, but that bothered me the whole time he was in the scene lol.
Second... It's too bad about the writer's block. Hopefully everything will work out for you. And haha.. Rukia's preggers. I don't normally like pregnancy stories... In fact I go out of my way not to read them. But I'll try this one out.
6/9/2008 c16 MysteriousEyez
O.O This chapter left me going huh I had to read it again to figure out what u were saying. Not your fault, its my own. My fault for trying to read this while being sleepy as all hell. Anywho, great chapter and up date soon!
O.O This chapter left me going huh I had to read it again to figure out what u were saying. Not your fault, its my own. My fault for trying to read this while being sleepy as all hell. Anywho, great chapter and up date soon!
6/8/2008 c1 Jimmany Jillicars
This is quite possibly the most well written piece of fanfiction i've ever read. Drab and monotonous in some parts maybe, (but I'm Irish so well used to it!) beautiful descriptive writing, great imagery. I can see a lot of thought went into it, unlike most fanfics! Probably drew out the whole "don't wanna be friend, wanna be your lover" thing. God I love Radiohead! Sorry, started singing for no reason there :P You defininately have a talent for writing, but try something a little more upbeat in the future because I can sense a sly sense of humour readin' your stuff!
p.s. totaly know what the whole annoying sibling thing is like!
peace out
This is quite possibly the most well written piece of fanfiction i've ever read. Drab and monotonous in some parts maybe, (but I'm Irish so well used to it!) beautiful descriptive writing, great imagery. I can see a lot of thought went into it, unlike most fanfics! Probably drew out the whole "don't wanna be friend, wanna be your lover" thing. God I love Radiohead! Sorry, started singing for no reason there :P You defininately have a talent for writing, but try something a little more upbeat in the future because I can sense a sly sense of humour readin' your stuff!
p.s. totaly know what the whole annoying sibling thing is like!
peace out
6/7/2008 c16 icymist
wow.
aww it was sad.
ecstasy is in a song i just heard..wierd..
well anyway nicely written as always.
updates soon please!
wow.
aww it was sad.
ecstasy is in a song i just heard..wierd..
well anyway nicely written as always.
updates soon please!
6/7/2008 c16 gsk
I didn't really understand that there were two dimensions in the beginning. But after reading everything, I think it's a really good story!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
I didn't really understand that there were two dimensions in the beginning. But after reading everything, I think it's a really good story!
I can't wait for the next chapter.