for W HIME9/5/2014 c4 Guest
Please update this soon. please
Please update this soon. please
6/13/2014 c4 Guest
it's really a good idea you got in here
but you must really have a beta reader. you grammar is really bad
btw, is this dead?
it's really a good idea you got in here
but you must really have a beta reader. you grammar is really bad
btw, is this dead?
7/29/2011 c4 lwolfrider
Love IT, plz update soon! coz i have a feling that the jusy best parts are just to come!
so agen UPDATE SOON!
(picturing futer... reyu-a lot fangirls-jealous shizuru-..)
...mm (X.X)-[K.O.wolf]
UPDATE SOON!
Love IT, plz update soon! coz i have a feling that the jusy best parts are just to come!
so agen UPDATE SOON!
(picturing futer... reyu-a lot fangirls-jealous shizuru-..)
...mm (X.X)-[K.O.wolf]
UPDATE SOON!
4/7/2010 c4 
4It will Rhein
WHAT THE?
that was BRILLIANT!(thumbs up)
i love IT already
pls pls pls update son
cant wait what'll happen next
and i hope that ull keep the story going pls?
(hug) really love it
nice one there MUA
ill lookin forward to the next chapie
PS: hope that reyu will have a MANY fangirls haha
4It will RheinWHAT THE?
that was BRILLIANT!(thumbs up)
i love IT already
pls pls pls update son
cant wait what'll happen next
and i hope that ull keep the story going pls?
(hug) really love it
nice one there MUA
ill lookin forward to the next chapie
PS: hope that reyu will have a MANY fangirls haha
5/16/2009 c4 6Lee Lamprush
i really liked this story even with the erros and i don't know if you will finish it i hope so because it is worth wile so if you don't finish thanks fo the taste if you do thanks in advance for a good story
6Lee Lamprushi really liked this story even with the erros and i don't know if you will finish it i hope so because it is worth wile so if you don't finish thanks fo the taste if you do thanks in advance for a good story
2/20/2009 c4 16Ume sama
I don't know if you are planning updating anytime soon, but this seems like a good plot. Grammer could use some work, but over all not that bad.
16Ume samaI don't know if you are planning updating anytime soon, but this seems like a good plot. Grammer could use some work, but over all not that bad.
12/18/2008 c4 bobo-q
come on i knoe it's been almost a yearbut pleasecould u try updating the story soon
(^_^) thanks
come on i knoe it's been almost a yearbut pleasecould u try updating the story soon
(^_^) thanks
5/28/2008 c4 1Rikku-Spira
Great chapter ^^ I really like the way this story is going. I had a bit of trouble trying to read this, so if you want I can proof read it for you. Just let me know ^^
1Rikku-SpiraGreat chapter ^^ I really like the way this story is going. I had a bit of trouble trying to read this, so if you want I can proof read it for you. Just let me know ^^
5/25/2008 c4 chum-sa
Shizuru Fiogiu? Why? i think i love Fujino than Fiogiu..whatever i'm still Shiznat's fan! Hope that u'll continue soon..
ps.thank you for update!
Shizuru Fiogiu? Why? i think i love Fujino than Fiogiu..whatever i'm still Shiznat's fan! Hope that u'll continue soon..
ps.thank you for update!
5/24/2008 c4 mizfoo
nice! i really like where the story is going. don't take too long to update, please. even though this is your first fanfic, i must say you're doing very well. so have confidence in your writing skill, ok? we'll be looking forward to the next chapter. update soon, oks?
nice! i really like where the story is going. don't take too long to update, please. even though this is your first fanfic, i must say you're doing very well. so have confidence in your writing skill, ok? we'll be looking forward to the next chapter. update soon, oks?
5/24/2008 c4 11Rain141
Okay kid u have talent, but as many people have pointed out u need spelling help.
If u wan't i'll spellcheck it for u?
just send me a message if ur interested, okay?
11Rain141Okay kid u have talent, but as many people have pointed out u need spelling help.
If u wan't i'll spellcheck it for u?
just send me a message if ur interested, okay?
5/23/2008 c4 2Von Krapper
to tell you the truth, i can't continue reading this because of too many spelling mistake. and i'm very critical with spellings. aren't you using word? or aren't you reading any other fics because you even misspelled shizuru's name. you should have a proof reader so that they can check at least your misspelled words. i hope you don't get offended, i'm just advising you. but all in all, your story premise is good.
2Von Krapperto tell you the truth, i can't continue reading this because of too many spelling mistake. and i'm very critical with spellings. aren't you using word? or aren't you reading any other fics because you even misspelled shizuru's name. you should have a proof reader so that they can check at least your misspelled words. i hope you don't get offended, i'm just advising you. but all in all, your story premise is good.