3/2/2020 c4 1girlfromkerteh
I love how you describe their thoughts, I love how you use such concrete imagery to describe abstract feelings. You're really talented xx
I love how you describe their thoughts, I love how you use such concrete imagery to describe abstract feelings. You're really talented xx
10/28/2019 c15 garciamonique2011
Wow! This was so beautifully written and such a wonderful story. I loved how each chapter felt like it could be a standalone, they all worked so well that I feel like you didn’t even need context. That’s not saying that they weren’t cohesive though. I loved how Sirius and Remus work so well together and how they were just so happy being together that it didn’t really matter if anyone else knew. I loved how every touch was special and that Sirius was the one making an effort to communicate clearly to prevent Remus from leaving. I love how Remus let his worries take a backseat when he was with Sirius. Most of all though I loved how Sirius always talked about the future and made it clear he wanted Remus forever.
Wow! This was so beautifully written and such a wonderful story. I loved how each chapter felt like it could be a standalone, they all worked so well that I feel like you didn’t even need context. That’s not saying that they weren’t cohesive though. I loved how Sirius and Remus work so well together and how they were just so happy being together that it didn’t really matter if anyone else knew. I loved how every touch was special and that Sirius was the one making an effort to communicate clearly to prevent Remus from leaving. I love how Remus let his worries take a backseat when he was with Sirius. Most of all though I loved how Sirius always talked about the future and made it clear he wanted Remus forever.
10/13/2019 c8 Anonymous
Really good story I love everything about it )
Really good story I love everything about it )
10/10/2019 c15 Guest
So I may be ten years late to this story, but it is so lovely. I’m glad I eventually found my way here!
So I may be ten years late to this story, but it is so lovely. I’m glad I eventually found my way here!
9/7/2019 c15 SushiHerondale
Oh my heart my heart my heart my heart. My poor bleeding heart crying with love over this story. Bless you for writing this amazing piece of work it was absolutely beautiful.
Oh my heart my heart my heart my heart. My poor bleeding heart crying with love over this story. Bless you for writing this amazing piece of work it was absolutely beautiful.
6/23/2019 c15 Guest
i absolutely love love love this. this is an old doc by now but it still remains in my top three favorite fan fictions. i adore the cuteness of it, and how it sneaks in serious topics without the overwhelming sadness of some other fics. the style of writing is, full stop, amazing and admirable and it’s my goal to be able to write like that. if you read this, author, know that you did a good job and made a girl happy :)
i absolutely love love love this. this is an old doc by now but it still remains in my top three favorite fan fictions. i adore the cuteness of it, and how it sneaks in serious topics without the overwhelming sadness of some other fics. the style of writing is, full stop, amazing and admirable and it’s my goal to be able to write like that. if you read this, author, know that you did a good job and made a girl happy :)
6/18/2019 c15 scarlett
i cried. I would never admit it aloud but i did. im not sorry for being so emotional because this was just too well written and put together to not cry over. thank you.
i cried. I would never admit it aloud but i did. im not sorry for being so emotional because this was just too well written and put together to not cry over. thank you.
5/31/2019 c15 Guest
I love the way you write and I LOVE LOVE LOVE your Remus and Sirius. This story is absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing it
I love the way you write and I LOVE LOVE LOVE your Remus and Sirius. This story is absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing it
4/10/2019 c15 Guest
This was so well written and I loved it! There are so many lines that should be classics and this deserves to be a masterpiece just for your writing style
This was so well written and I loved it! There are so many lines that should be classics and this deserves to be a masterpiece just for your writing style
2/17/2019 c15 stillinthemaking
I am pretty late to the party on this, so I hope you still read reviews. I loved this story. You have a way of describing things that is both cute and profound if that makes any sense, and it's made this story much more than the sum of it's parts. So thank you.
I am pretty late to the party on this, so I hope you still read reviews. I loved this story. You have a way of describing things that is both cute and profound if that makes any sense, and it's made this story much more than the sum of it's parts. So thank you.
1/4/2019 c2 Guest
Man I just discovered this and it is beautiful! 10/10 for such lovely writing about a lovely ship
Man I just discovered this and it is beautiful! 10/10 for such lovely writing about a lovely ship