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3/11/2020 c1 Naomi
OMG OMG I LOVE THIS. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE. BTWVI KNOW I'M LATE ASFFFFF
4/28/2012 c1 IHeartEminem
Great One-Shot (hopefully another chapter to it) :)

Um well first I just want to say I LOVE all your other stories with Brock and Melanie! Really! And on this I couldn't help but think back to your other stories where she will say she had these visions in her head about her and somebody else in a bad situation, and I just couldnt help but think that this could have been the scene she always visioned, I really want to know what happened! I cant believe Brock will do something like this, but he is short-tempered but I guess he really lost it, whatever that happened just really made him strike out, I hope Melanie feels soon better and recovers from whatever it is..I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS! even though it's been a few years :D

Your an Awesome Writer and loving your stories they're all so Great! And this one just leaves me filled with mystery! Just sitting at the edge of my seat wanting to know what happened! ;D

Update Soon Please! :-)

XxX
4/8/2008 c1 20Pinayprincesa
Poor Mel :( Hope she'll b ok

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