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6/24/2008 c1 146Sushi Chi
Ah! Love the fact that Dean will only speak in Latin. That is too perfect. This was very well written. I was really confused at first. "John's back? And what's with Sam? It says the characters in this story or Dean and Bobby!" then after the first part I was like, "Ooh. Here's Dean and Bobby! Yes!" It was a good story. I liked it. Well done.
4/21/2008 c1 11Noelani618
Hey, this is a neat story concept ya got. Dean is my favorite character and this was a wonderful portrayal of him. *sighs* Now I'm going to be a critic. You definitely need to work on your grammer and punctuation. A lot of your sentences turned into run ons that didn't alaways make sense. I recommend getting a beta to help you correct your stories.

Okay, I'm done being critical. Anyway I really enjoyed this so kudos!
4/9/2008 c1 607Ghostwriter
John, Dean, and Sammy. Back together again. The way it should be. And I think I just quoted the Crossroad Demon. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

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