for Name Upon The Stone11/25/2009 c2 helma
that`s so tragic. i hope kakashi will be alright. please update
that`s so tragic. i hope kakashi will be alright. please update
4/27/2009 c2 melissa
Very interesting. I hope it comes off hiatus someday.
Very interesting. I hope it comes off hiatus someday.
265/9/2008 c2 MikaSamu
You do a fantastic job of maintaining the intensity of the plot and the emotions. Very plausible based upon what we know so far of the canon. You capture the characters wonderfully.
You do a fantastic job of maintaining the intensity of the plot and the emotions. Very plausible based upon what we know so far of the canon. You capture the characters wonderfully.
5/9/2008 c2 Gossamerisred
I really like this ^^ Looking forward to more!
The way that you write Kakashi is beautiful :3 He's a pretty hard charater to pin, and it seems so perfect!
I really like this ^^ Looking forward to more!
The way that you write Kakashi is beautiful :3 He's a pretty hard charater to pin, and it seems so perfect!
4/12/2008 c1 MikaSamu
Very well done! The premise of the Akatsuki attacking those close to Naruto has been rarely explored. The combination of action and emotion was nicely mixed. Tobi was beautifully in character. The title and conclusion of this chapter were perfect.
Very well done! The premise of the Akatsuki attacking those close to Naruto has been rarely explored. The combination of action and emotion was nicely mixed. Tobi was beautifully in character. The title and conclusion of this chapter were perfect.