for Double Deception2/12/2016 c1 hallmandy35
This is a good story it needs the third chapter 1 with the plot twist, and one with the surprise ending
This is a good story it needs the third chapter 1 with the plot twist, and one with the surprise ending
2/12/2016 c1 Mandy
It was a good it's a good story it needs a third chapter though
It was a good it's a good story it needs a third chapter though
4/27/2010 c1 
7kaori and yoshi
i liked it a lot. you should write more. i want to know what happens next.
7kaori and yoshii liked it a lot. you should write more. i want to know what happens next.
4/15/2008 c1 82KHwhitelion
L-O-V-E this story! I absolutely love writing about sakura and orochimarus 'father/daughter' relationship and kabuto and sakura's brother/ssiter' relationship! I hope you wrie more one-shots of this superior-san! I wil too!t
82KHwhitelionL-O-V-E this story! I absolutely love writing about sakura and orochimarus 'father/daughter' relationship and kabuto and sakura's brother/ssiter' relationship! I hope you wrie more one-shots of this superior-san! I wil too!t