7/20/2015 c4 6Loveableheart
I like this story's! I've been skimming, and like it.
Please don't curse though... Or use the name of Lord in vain. He loves you!
Please don't take that the wrong way. :)
I like this story's! I've been skimming, and like it.
Please don't curse though... Or use the name of Lord in vain. He loves you!
Please don't take that the wrong way. :)
12/31/2009 c5 1SaAsha
Hey this is really good. It's amazingly good. I think you should keep going although its seems you have stopped. :(
Hey this is really good. It's amazingly good. I think you should keep going although its seems you have stopped. :(
6/19/2009 c2 Sarah B
McFly... I like Princess Audrey already. =) Hehe I love McFly and the Jo Bros very good mix for what I'm sure will be a great story!
McFly... I like Princess Audrey already. =) Hehe I love McFly and the Jo Bros very good mix for what I'm sure will be a great story!
3/6/2009 c1 jaime leighton
omg i love it now i wish i could read the whole thing its the best thing i ever read!=D
omg i love it now i wish i could read the whole thing its the best thing i ever read!=D
1/8/2009 c5 kkckat3
hey i just read your story and it is amazing! please please continue i would really really like to finish reading this story and it's just gotten to the good part!
hey i just read your story and it is amazing! please please continue i would really really like to finish reading this story and it's just gotten to the good part!
1/5/2009 c1 7Cetacean
1) This site is for fanfiction, not original fiction. Fictionpress dot com is the site you want. Kindly remove it.
2) Your main character is the classic example of a Sue. To avoid these, try taking Mary Sue tests. Just google them.
Have a nice day :)
-Cetacean.
1) This site is for fanfiction, not original fiction. Fictionpress dot com is the site you want. Kindly remove it.
2) Your main character is the classic example of a Sue. To avoid these, try taking Mary Sue tests. Just google them.
Have a nice day :)
-Cetacean.
11/1/2008 c5 potter-addiction
AAH!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Preferably soon. :D
I love this story! Amazing job!
AAH!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Preferably soon. :D
I love this story! Amazing job!
9/13/2008 c5 1BellazWorld
ARGH! CLIFFHANGER! GR! UPDATE!
Have you DIED? There hasn't been an update since May! HAVE YOU DIED?
If not, UPDATE!
ARGH! CLIFFHANGER! GR! UPDATE!
Have you DIED? There hasn't been an update since May! HAVE YOU DIED?
If not, UPDATE!
9/13/2008 c4 BellazWorld
*dances around and starts to chant loudly in a singsongy voice* HA HA HA HA HA! NICKY LIKES PRINCESS BRATTITUDE! HA HA HA HA HA!
I really liked this chapter!
*dances around and starts to chant loudly in a singsongy voice* HA HA HA HA HA! NICKY LIKES PRINCESS BRATTITUDE! HA HA HA HA HA!
I really liked this chapter!
9/13/2008 c3 BellazWorld
I loved this one! I especially loved it when Nick called Audrey 'Princess Brattitude'. IT WAS SO FUNNY!
I loved this one! I especially loved it when Nick called Audrey 'Princess Brattitude'. IT WAS SO FUNNY!