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6/23/2013 c11 1269AnimeFreak69
it's 2013
you last updated in 2010 ...
now i just wanna curl up in a corner and cry
6/23/2013 c2 69AnimeFreak69
i have this weird feeling ...
Yashi Taishou, likes ramen ... hmm
3/10/2011 c11 Sonyadore
Glad to hear of an impending update and looking forward to it ~_^
3/10/2011 c10 Sonyadore
Ha!

Nice... can't wait for the tag-team attack next chapter ^^ And maybe a little show from Tetsiaga ^^ Inuyasha IS prone to over kill... Adament barrage could be good - ah but the clean-up afterwards... Wind Scar it is! - don't worry just getting carried away ;P

Good writing, and great reveal of Yashi's true identity ^^ No wonder he understands Inuyasha so well - he's in the same position, not human and afraid of rejection based on his demonic heritage.

Good reveal of Inuyasaha and Kagome's feelings - well Inu's more so but hey - and nice 'timely' interuption ;)
3/10/2011 c9 Sonyadore
Nice! Some good answers to some questions here such as how much Yashi knows about Kagome and Inuyasha... though I still suspect he may have left out their names on purpose - he seems smart enough - or at least suspects that Kagome and Inuyasha are the priestess and hanyou from his story...

Liking the character interactions, espically Inu/Kag this chapter ^^ when Inuyasha asked Kagome to dance it was almost a exact mirror of Yashi asking Ayumi out! I like little things like that ;)
3/10/2011 c8 Sonyadore
Nice to get some insight into Yashi's character ;) Hmmm some things about him remind me of Inuyasha... ut Yashi's temperment is zen in compairson to Inu's ~_^

Hmmm Inuyasha asked Kagome to dance... MAYBE something Yashi said got through that thick skull ^^

Still there's a lot unknown about Yashi... he's not a 'normal' human, and he MAY be a demon, he knows a lot about the jewel... and I still think he KNOWS Inuyasha and kagome... hmmm... Something to look forward to finding out I guess ;)
3/10/2011 c7 Sonyadore
Ah! So close! *chuckles* that always happens when Kagome and Inuyasha are having a moment/ getting somewhere in regard to confronting their feelings for eachother...

Very nicely written too. Much better flow this go ;)

Looking forward to finding out more about Yashi ^^
3/10/2011 c6 Sonyadore
Nice plot movement, and I really liked how you showed Inuyasha's thoughts/ inner conflict ;)

... though I am surprised he admited it to Yashi... he's usually so tight lipped about his emotions...

Wonder what Ayumi's part was? Did she ask Kagome the same question? Give her encouragement? - in addition to procuring a decent song selection! :)
3/10/2011 c5 Sonyadore
My fav chapter in this fic so far ^^

Hmmm I've been wondering since Yashi's date became a double date if playing matchmaker would happen... also Yashi seems a little too 'perceptive' when it comes to Inuyasha and Kagome... I think he does know them for who they are. Plus the way he handels things with Inuyasha, like he understands him; I suppose it could just be taht he doesn't see him as a monster/ demon like ppl back in the feudal era, but I think that perhaps there's a little knowledge of Inu-youkai at play...

Loved the car ride scene, it was my fav this chapter. I really like how you write in the character's thoughts too ^^
3/10/2011 c4 Sonyadore
A very amusing chapter I enjoyed all of it; Inu's unexpected appearence, Kagome's mom getting Inuyasha to do her spring cleaning, Inuyasha's confession in his sleep, the Inuyasha/ Yashi meeting, all of it. But my fav part had to be the interaction b/w Inu and Yashi at the end when they were at the kitchen table.

Only one thing I'd like to see; flow. A better flow in the writing, sometimes the sentances seem a little choppy. But other than that AWSOME! ^^ Sound plot and good detail, nice progession and a good level of suspence/ mystery.

This is a nice, light and comic fic. Thanks for writing it ;)
3/10/2011 c3 Sonyadore
LOL - your A/Ns are funny ;)

Any how... the review;

Loved the three way phone call ^^ and Kagome's return, ask-out and accidential sit followed up with the puppy-dog-pout. Nicely written.

I though Inuyasha would be going as himself at first, but after the 'get ready' comment I am wondering if perhaps I was wrong on that one... :) I'll have to wait and see ^^
3/10/2011 c2 Sonyadore
OK. Officially convinced/ thinking that Yashi is a decendant of Inuyasha and Kagome, though with the described eye colour he could be Shippo's decendant; Shippo likes 'ninja food' too... but hey. We'll see! ;)

Yashi, Interesting development/ character...
1/31/2011 c1 Sonyadore
I like the arguement b/w Inuyasha and Kagome; sure it's a classic but it never gets old ;) Dido for Miroku getting slapped...

I'm looking forward to the plot progression next chapter!
1/25/2011 c11 4BirdHummingAlong
I hope you update soon, the suspense is killing me! really good story, i really like how you made Yashi's personality, he is clearly like inuyasha, but also holds some of Kagome's characteristics, such as her maturity and sweet, understanding personality. Cant wait for the update! :)
1/25/2011 c2 BirdHummingAlong
A decedent of Inuyasha...this is incredibly intriguing. I think you are incredibly creative to think this up! :) i can't wait to read the next chapter.
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