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13Thing With No Talent
Jazz is gonna do what Jazz wants to do, and woe betide anyone who stops him. Sentinel is a great "jerk" character, though. You can make him do anything horrible and it's (gasp) in-character! W00t!
13Thing With No TalentJazz is gonna do what Jazz wants to do, and woe betide anyone who stops him. Sentinel is a great "jerk" character, though. You can make him do anything horrible and it's (gasp) in-character! W00t!
4/22/2008 c4 InzanityRulz
Interesting story. I like it. Update soon!
Interesting story. I like it. Update soon!
4/22/2008 c4 2Saberfrost
o.o... OK thAT WAS AWESOME!
Poor prowl and Jazz Lockdown better keep away if he knows whats good for him -Brings out Ironhide- sic him boy go go GO!
... K maybe that won't work but i'll think of something.. eventually! :3
Great story keep updating!
2Saberfrosto.o... OK thAT WAS AWESOME!
Poor prowl and Jazz Lockdown better keep away if he knows whats good for him -Brings out Ironhide- sic him boy go go GO!
... K maybe that won't work but i'll think of something.. eventually! :3
Great story keep updating!
4/22/2008 c4 11Dealing With It Now
Ooh, this just keeps getting better~ I love a maturing Jazz, and understanding Commander Magnus for the win! And Sentinel is perfectly in character as the jerk he is~ -thumbs up- I love this story, keep it up!
11Dealing With It NowOoh, this just keeps getting better~ I love a maturing Jazz, and understanding Commander Magnus for the win! And Sentinel is perfectly in character as the jerk he is~ -thumbs up- I love this story, keep it up!
4/22/2008 c3 Dealing With It Now
This is so cute~! I really love what you've done with the great characterizations, and TF:A Jazz x Prowl love = amazing. I can't wait to see where this will go~! -waits (patiently) for update-
This is so cute~! I really love what you've done with the great characterizations, and TF:A Jazz x Prowl love = amazing. I can't wait to see where this will go~! -waits (patiently) for update-
4/22/2008 c3 9Baird Crevan
This. Is. Adorable!
That last line: "Are you doing what I think you're doing?" Just about cracked me up. And your absolutely right about there being something deep between Optimus and Sentinel, and I don't think we've seen the end of it.
Great fic! I'm so glad that you decided to do TF:A, because it seriously has some great characterizations that authors can play with.
Update at your leisure! (Which I hope it soon!)
9Baird CrevanThis. Is. Adorable!
That last line: "Are you doing what I think you're doing?" Just about cracked me up. And your absolutely right about there being something deep between Optimus and Sentinel, and I don't think we've seen the end of it.
Great fic! I'm so glad that you decided to do TF:A, because it seriously has some great characterizations that authors can play with.
Update at your leisure! (Which I hope it soon!)
4/22/2008 c3 18Iris magic
That's just beautiful.
Bulkhead is a cute BIG thing, and Sentinel needs an enema, and Prowl and Jazz need each other, Animated, G1 or any other way.
18Iris magicThat's just beautiful.
Bulkhead is a cute BIG thing, and Sentinel needs an enema, and Prowl and Jazz need each other, Animated, G1 or any other way.
4/22/2008 c3 VampireArgonian92
Very nice, I love how you make out each charater's personality. Keep up the good work! Signing off!
Very nice, I love how you make out each charater's personality. Keep up the good work! Signing off!