for Protection9/27/2011 c1 
6Prowls-little-hetalian
YAY!C PXJ! aawww, I LOVE TFA fics, and PxJ fics+TFA= a very happy fangirl/reader! especially when the story is awsome!
6Prowls-little-hetalianYAY!C PXJ! aawww, I LOVE TFA fics, and PxJ fics+TFA= a very happy fangirl/reader! especially when the story is awsome!
9/4/2011 c19 5Tana112
Your stories are so good, I find myself sad when they're not finished. This one in particular is adorable!
5Tana112Your stories are so good, I find myself sad when they're not finished. This one in particular is adorable!
1/3/2011 c12 13Sparky The Tomboy
I LOVE IT! I love pairing Jazz and Prowl together, it's just so sweet. Oh and by the way I just love your stories. Your a great writer.
13Sparky The TomboyI LOVE IT! I love pairing Jazz and Prowl together, it's just so sweet. Oh and by the way I just love your stories. Your a great writer.
12/23/2010 c19 DearGodNo
Holy. Cow.
I cannot describe how much I simply love this story. Like, they need to invent a new word. The detail is amazing, the character depth has hooked me, and the plot itself makes me swoon with sheer awesome-ness.
It's hard for me to find a story nowadays, that I truly like this much. There isn't much TFA stories being written at this time, which saddens me. Seeing this though, sparks a light of interest for me. I am no expert writer, heck, I'm an ametur, but this story is so amazing. I only read half of it yesterday in the morning, and I could feel the emotions Jazz was going through. I felt like throwing stuff and ripping things when Sentinel kept butting into Jazz's love life, and I simply wanted to destroy Lockdown for doing what he was going to do to Bumblebee. And I'm actually a giant Lockdown fan, which surprises even me.
But more importantly, how you wrote Jazz's P.O.V simply captured me. I am no expert critic, but I really, really loved this story. I loved the cute moments with Prowl and Jazz, and couldn't sleep at night when I stopped reading at the part when Lockdown almost had his way with Jazz.
It may sound a bit stupid to get over a story, but I just did anyway because it was just that amazing. Awesome plot, amazing story, and simply adorable.
The GIST of what I'm saying is basically this was a great story. I can't wait to check out more things by you.
Holy. Cow.
I cannot describe how much I simply love this story. Like, they need to invent a new word. The detail is amazing, the character depth has hooked me, and the plot itself makes me swoon with sheer awesome-ness.
It's hard for me to find a story nowadays, that I truly like this much. There isn't much TFA stories being written at this time, which saddens me. Seeing this though, sparks a light of interest for me. I am no expert writer, heck, I'm an ametur, but this story is so amazing. I only read half of it yesterday in the morning, and I could feel the emotions Jazz was going through. I felt like throwing stuff and ripping things when Sentinel kept butting into Jazz's love life, and I simply wanted to destroy Lockdown for doing what he was going to do to Bumblebee. And I'm actually a giant Lockdown fan, which surprises even me.
But more importantly, how you wrote Jazz's P.O.V simply captured me. I am no expert critic, but I really, really loved this story. I loved the cute moments with Prowl and Jazz, and couldn't sleep at night when I stopped reading at the part when Lockdown almost had his way with Jazz.
It may sound a bit stupid to get over a story, but I just did anyway because it was just that amazing. Awesome plot, amazing story, and simply adorable.
The GIST of what I'm saying is basically this was a great story. I can't wait to check out more things by you.
12/1/2009 c19 3Shizuka Taiyou
Well awsome writing as always my friend. I'm glad ya back in school and have a job (Wish I could get one without my grandmother shooting them down.). Keep up all the awsomeness.
C.D.
3Shizuka TaiyouWell awsome writing as always my friend. I'm glad ya back in school and have a job (Wish I could get one without my grandmother shooting them down.). Keep up all the awsomeness.
C.D.
11/30/2009 c19 CuteKittten
OMG! He did not just say that! Thats just so mean, I mean i'm sure its true and all but he doesn't have to brag about it.
Im sure Prowl will forgive him ... wont he?
OMG! He did not just say that! Thats just so mean, I mean i'm sure its true and all but he doesn't have to brag about it.
Im sure Prowl will forgive him ... wont he?
9/25/2009 c18 2Kaito Naito -Eject
This is a really good story so far. I would love to read more once you get more up.
2Kaito Naito -EjectThis is a really good story so far. I would love to read more once you get more up.