for Protection9/20/2009 c18 
3thegrimbee
I like this story! So adventurous and so unpredictable! Can't wait for the next update!
3thegrimbeeI like this story! So adventurous and so unpredictable! Can't wait for the next update!
8/14/2009 c17 3CheesetothePower
Personally, I think this is one of this story's weaker chapters. It was a bit to rushed in comparison to the rest of the story. You set this chapter to have a lot more potential than it exhibits. I love this story and have been reading it since, what was it? chapter 13? other than how rushed this chapter seemed in my opinion, there is nothing else worth comenting on this story than it's written well.
3CheesetothePowerPersonally, I think this is one of this story's weaker chapters. It was a bit to rushed in comparison to the rest of the story. You set this chapter to have a lot more potential than it exhibits. I love this story and have been reading it since, what was it? chapter 13? other than how rushed this chapter seemed in my opinion, there is nothing else worth comenting on this story than it's written well.
2/13/2009 c18 15panthergirl29
I have a bunch of things I think are going to happen, but of course my imagination is crazy and comes up with some wierd things. Please keep writing!
15panthergirl29I have a bunch of things I think are going to happen, but of course my imagination is crazy and comes up with some wierd things. Please keep writing!
1/29/2009 c15 3Shizuka Taiyou
They're both jacka_es. But that's what makes em loveable to a point. And we can't see anyone else doing their personalities, huh? Keep up the fic girl. Can't wait for chapter 19.
C.D.
3Shizuka TaiyouThey're both jacka_es. But that's what makes em loveable to a point. And we can't see anyone else doing their personalities, huh? Keep up the fic girl. Can't wait for chapter 19.
C.D.
1/29/2009 c14 Shizuka Taiyou
Like I said. Sentinal is a jacka_. Out of all the Autobots so far he's the first one to die in my book. Swear to God he's gonna die first (If you don't count that one episode where Optimus died and the Allspark Key and the Allspark itself brought him back to life.).
C.D.
Like I said. Sentinal is a jacka_. Out of all the Autobots so far he's the first one to die in my book. Swear to God he's gonna die first (If you don't count that one episode where Optimus died and the Allspark Key and the Allspark itself brought him back to life.).
C.D.
1/29/2009 c13 Shizuka Taiyou
Hehehehe, Sentinal is a jacka_. Sorry to Sentinal fans but he is. But we need someone like him and I don't see anyone else to fit the description. And when Jazz hit him in the middrif I was chuckling and thinking to myself 'Stubborn idiodic son-of-a-b_tch of a bastard. He deserves that for getting into other peoples business. Sucker.' But like I said no offence to Sentinal fans and I don't hate him. I just dislike him to a point where I can laugh my but off when he looks like an idiot. Just like when the Headmaster took his body. Man that was halarious. And optimus' laugh was freaky. Did you think his laugh was freaky? Caause it was to me.
C.D.
Hehehehe, Sentinal is a jacka_. Sorry to Sentinal fans but he is. But we need someone like him and I don't see anyone else to fit the description. And when Jazz hit him in the middrif I was chuckling and thinking to myself 'Stubborn idiodic son-of-a-b_tch of a bastard. He deserves that for getting into other peoples business. Sucker.' But like I said no offence to Sentinal fans and I don't hate him. I just dislike him to a point where I can laugh my but off when he looks like an idiot. Just like when the Headmaster took his body. Man that was halarious. And optimus' laugh was freaky. Did you think his laugh was freaky? Caause it was to me.
C.D.
1/29/2009 c11 Shizuka Taiyou
Like I said I thought I ran out of chapters to review to. I'm glad I didn't cause I like to review this very fine, cool, awsome fic of yours. I can't wait for chapter 19. Keep going girl you're doing awsome with this one.
C.D.
Like I said I thought I ran out of chapters to review to. I'm glad I didn't cause I like to review this very fine, cool, awsome fic of yours. I can't wait for chapter 19. Keep going girl you're doing awsome with this one.
C.D.
1/29/2009 c10 Shizuka Taiyou
Whew, I thought I ran out of chapters to review to. I was going through all the chapters before this to see if I could review them. And I already did, and I thought 'Man I think I ran out of chapters to review this fic. I might need to sent a PM to Juana about this fic. Damn I hate it when I run out of chapters to review to.' Ya know what I mean about that? When ya like a certian fic so much ya need to review the fic so much and tell em ya can't get enough of it? That's what I'm saying girl. I need more chapters before I run out to review to ya. And besides the only other fics I can review to are the ones I already reviewed. Still an awsome fic. Keep this fic rolling. Don't want to see this one dead.
C.D.
Whew, I thought I ran out of chapters to review to. I was going through all the chapters before this to see if I could review them. And I already did, and I thought 'Man I think I ran out of chapters to review this fic. I might need to sent a PM to Juana about this fic. Damn I hate it when I run out of chapters to review to.' Ya know what I mean about that? When ya like a certian fic so much ya need to review the fic so much and tell em ya can't get enough of it? That's what I'm saying girl. I need more chapters before I run out to review to ya. And besides the only other fics I can review to are the ones I already reviewed. Still an awsome fic. Keep this fic rolling. Don't want to see this one dead.
C.D.
1/28/2009 c16 Shizuka Taiyou
MORE GOODNESS! I WANT MORE GOODNESS! WRITE MORE GOODNESS!
You write good fics girl. Keep going. I want to know what'll happen next.
C.D.
MORE GOODNESS! I WANT MORE GOODNESS! WRITE MORE GOODNESS!
You write good fics girl. Keep going. I want to know what'll happen next.
C.D.
1/19/2009 c18 find.me.please
After finishing up this fic, I went ahead and read some of your other stories. Then I realized not only are you a great and creative author, but you're also a mature one! You don't find too many of those anymore.
Kudos, and keep up the good work!
After finishing up this fic, I went ahead and read some of your other stories. Then I realized not only are you a great and creative author, but you're also a mature one! You don't find too many of those anymore.
Kudos, and keep up the good work!
1/15/2009 c18 62Transformersfan123
OMG I love this story. You have to put more up fast. I've been trying to wait, but it is so hard when you love something. Please hurry and put up more. I would like it if you put more in detail love scenes, too, but the story is great as it is.
62Transformersfan123OMG I love this story. You have to put more up fast. I've been trying to wait, but it is so hard when you love something. Please hurry and put up more. I would like it if you put more in detail love scenes, too, but the story is great as it is.
1/14/2009 c18 13FireFly92
Ohh... Poor Jazz... Now he's paranoid! ... With good reason... Hey! Maybe he'll turn into G1 Red Alert! XD Naw, that'd be not good... I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
13FireFly92Ohh... Poor Jazz... Now he's paranoid! ... With good reason... Hey! Maybe he'll turn into G1 Red Alert! XD Naw, that'd be not good... I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
1/10/2009 c18 47Yami-Yugi3
Hm *thinks* There's a battle, Prowl got hurt and Jazz comes to his rescue?
47Yami-Yugi3Hm *thinks* There's a battle, Prowl got hurt and Jazz comes to his rescue?