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6/9 c2 NaruSakuLover81
I loved this chapter, but I did not understand the beginning of the chapter. But, in all I love this story that is being made.
12/15/2017 c2 Kakashi Hatake
Excellent fanfiction. But it needs improvement. still awesome.
12/15/2017 c1 Iruka Umino
Dis never ,when was i his ,Jiraiya is his godfather/Sensei[i think].
4/28/2015 c2 A
Your writing style needs a lot of improvement. But since this one is from 2008, I bet You've improved already .all the best for your future projects!
5/4/2008 c2 2uzumakish
It was alright, you could describe more in the romantic sense though.

Update soon.
4/26/2008 c1 19chelsea-chee
So you make their kid die before them, huh? Eeh, whatever. Anyways, not much... romance per-say in that one but it was okay.
4/22/2008 c1 5Lord Cain55
Nice drabble. I like it.

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