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11/29/2008 c1 4bosniadovlin
Creepy creepy L. You're very good at writing a believable evil L.
10/7/2008 c1 2izeitgeist
wow! this one was even more amazing than the last one! i envy you, truly.
4/29/2008 c1 1wintersilk
Wow, I loved the concept of this. Dark, but I loved it! More importantly, I loved how L and Light were actually in character! I really enjoyed the one-sided conversation L had with himself while with Light. That was creative, and you handled the dialouge nicely! Awesome job!
4/23/2008 c1 18Sasskitten
Wow cool. Hey, is the reason why you have part four first like one of those moves that have a traggedy happen first then it goes back mayybe three hours or three months early and the actions that happened at them times are the reason that what happens happens? It was great and I am surprised you didn't get more reviews for it.
4/23/2008 c1 67WingsofSmoke
Wow. Just wow. I liked this a LOT. It's hard to find a good Death Note fic with implied pairings that make it realistic AND have - oh meh gawd - the characters, well, IN character! You're realy good at this *grins*

Also, I like how you put the scenes out of order. It gave more depth to the story.

Keep writing!

~S.N.R.

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