for Son of the Dark7/22/2009 c3 dragonlilly1993
haha! kai can act like such a girl! hes so totally cute! GREAT CHAPTER LOVE IT!
haha! kai can act like such a girl! hes so totally cute! GREAT CHAPTER LOVE IT!
1/28/2009 c9 Koneko-kun desu ka
'Ello...
Please updatet, I love this!
A litle late for this but I vot(?) for TysonxKai!
A gost maybe?
'Ello...
Please updatet, I love this!
A litle late for this but I vot(?) for TysonxKai!
A gost maybe?
8/30/2008 c9 
5Marsuss
nice xD it was real good only 1 mistake (u got some of the names mixed up in it u said Tala at one part and Train and Creed at another :P) other than that really good :D
5Marsussnice xD it was real good only 1 mistake (u got some of the names mixed up in it u said Tala at one part and Train and Creed at another :P) other than that really good :D
8/25/2008 c9 30BurningWhiteTwilight
Rei/Kai is just so cute! Great job on the smut scene in this chapter. I can't wait till you update. Harry and his friends must appologize, if they don't I will go hunting.
And I hope Tyson accepts that Kai has chosen Rei, though it wouldn't surprise me if he doesn't.
Anyway, hurry and update please!
30BurningWhiteTwilightRei/Kai is just so cute! Great job on the smut scene in this chapter. I can't wait till you update. Harry and his friends must appologize, if they don't I will go hunting.
And I hope Tyson accepts that Kai has chosen Rei, though it wouldn't surprise me if he doesn't.
Anyway, hurry and update please!
8/24/2008 c9 This Account Is So Old Wow
...it looks like you copypasted various lemon scenes from other fanfics since a Train, Creed, and Tala all randomly appeared in the scene before changing back into Kai and Rei. Or, maybe you were just incredibly, unbelievably distracted when writing and you occasionally wrote the wrong names?
Neither prospect speaks well for your fix though one is decidedly worse.
...it looks like you copypasted various lemon scenes from other fanfics since a Train, Creed, and Tala all randomly appeared in the scene before changing back into Kai and Rei. Or, maybe you were just incredibly, unbelievably distracted when writing and you occasionally wrote the wrong names?
Neither prospect speaks well for your fix though one is decidedly worse.
8/24/2008 c9 suzanne
the story is great keep up with the good and thank for turn ray and kai fic. can wait to see how the story going to end.
update soon.
the story is great keep up with the good and thank for turn ray and kai fic. can wait to see how the story going to end.
update soon.
8/24/2008 c9 10Soten-ni-zase
(Head/keyboard) not a smut story for the love of god please don't have a lot of sex scenes or else I'll stop reading this and to be honest I didn't want Yaoi at all but i was going to deal with it I just think that Yaoi should be kept to one series and that there shouldn't be romance in crossovers because then the story will focus on the couple and the plot will end up left behind and Kai must be cheering for this review
10Soten-ni-zase(Head/keyboard) not a smut story for the love of god please don't have a lot of sex scenes or else I'll stop reading this and to be honest I didn't want Yaoi at all but i was going to deal with it I just think that Yaoi should be kept to one series and that there shouldn't be romance in crossovers because then the story will focus on the couple and the plot will end up left behind and Kai must be cheering for this review
8/21/2008 c8 10Soten-ni-zase
how can you not know who owns Harry Potter? or Beyblade for that matter? I mean in the Japanese ver the creator gave the main character his name Takao Aoki creator of Beyblade Takao Kinomiya the main character of Beyblade Kai *glomps* update *kills writers block*
10Soten-ni-zasehow can you not know who owns Harry Potter? or Beyblade for that matter? I mean in the Japanese ver the creator gave the main character his name Takao Aoki creator of Beyblade Takao Kinomiya the main character of Beyblade Kai *glomps* update *kills writers block*